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caroline
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0 posted 1999-12-10 08:23 PM

Winter

Sparkling white snowflake
Dances in diamond joy
Midnight ice ballet

Spring

Crocus wakes at dawn
Invites hyacinths to see
Spring is arriving

Summer

Waves wander to shore
Seeking childrens' tiny toes
Leaving priceless smiles

Autumn

Slowly, breathlessly
In orange-gold silent yawn
Trees prepare for sleep

It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

Denise

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1 posted 1999-12-10 08:27 PM

Wow! Caroline these are wonderful! I love them!

Denise

Balladeer

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2 posted 1999-12-10 08:45 PM

Caroline, you must be part Japanese! These are great!

To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world.

caroline
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3 posted 1999-12-10 08:55 PM

Thank you Denise! I haven't written any Haiku since I was a child...Nan's kids inspired me!
(Nan~~Tell them thanks!)

Balladeer~~ LOL~~ My eyes are much too big for me to be part Japanese! Part Doe, maybe?? hehehehe

Thanks, glad you liked them!

It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

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4 posted 1999-12-10 08:56 PM

These just bloom like summer roses my friend.
Fantastic. And the colours work so well.

K

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

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5 posted 1999-12-10 09:07 PM

Awesome - Where were you for the Haiku workshop?.....

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

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6 posted 1999-12-11 05:16 AM

Caroline, WOW this is wonderful!! love it!!

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Michael

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since 1999-08-13

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7 posted 1999-12-11 06:25 AM

Oh, this is a great piece, Caroline.
The colors were the icing on the cake, really enhanced the feeling of each season. Wonderful job,

Michael

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

8 posted 1999-12-11 08:38 AM

Lovely Caroline!

A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 1999-12-12 11:31 AM

BRAVO!!!!

Martie

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10 posted 1999-12-12 12:03 PM

These were wonderful Caroline

In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

caroline
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11 posted 1999-12-12 02:31 PM

You know...this is the greatest place

It never fails to amaze me when someone likes something I've written. You all can never know what you do for my heart. The encouragement you give is priceless. Thanks so much!

It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

passing shadows
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12 posted 2005-04-15 06:55 AM

wonderful!

Artic Wind
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13 posted 2007-11-12 07:04 PM

I love the seasons

ARCTIC WIND

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