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Four Seasons ~~ Haiku

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caroline
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Winter

Sparkling white snowflake
Dances in diamond joy
Midnight ice ballet



Spring

Crocus wakes at dawn
Invites hyacinths to see
Spring is arriving



Summer

Waves wander to shore
Seeking childrens' tiny toes
Leaving priceless smiles



Autumn

Slowly, breathlessly
In orange-gold silent yawn
Trees prepare for sleep




 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

© Copyright 1999 Caroline - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-10-1999 08:27 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wow! Caroline these are wonderful! I love them!

 Denise


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Caroline, you must be part Japanese! These are great!

 To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world.

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Thank you Denise! I haven't written any Haiku since I was a child...Nan's kids inspired me!
(Nan~~Tell them thanks!)

Balladeer~~ LOL~~ My eyes are much too big for me to be part Japanese! Part Doe, maybe?? hehehehe     Thanks, glad you liked them!


 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

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4 posted 12-10-1999 08:56 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

These just bloom like summer roses my friend.
Fantastic. And the colours work so well.

K

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Awesome - Where were you for the Haiku workshop?.....
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Caroline, WOW this is wonderful!! love it!!


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Oh, this is a great piece, Caroline.
The colors were the icing on the cake, really enhanced the feeling of each season.  Wonderful job,

Michael
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Lovely Caroline!  

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


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BRAVO!!!!
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These were wonderful Caroline

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)
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  You know...this is the greatest place  

It never fails to amaze me when someone likes something I've written. You all can never know what you do for my heart. The encouragement you give is priceless. Thanks so much!


 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

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wonderful!
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I love the seasons

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