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He looked once, I looked twice

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candace
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0 posted 12-10-1999 08:15 PM       View Profile for candace   Email candace   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for candace

Rays of sunshine
exist in my heart

Gleaming in my eyes
is a burst of surprise

I found the thing that
was unknowingly lost

Silly how i did not recognize
such a valuable thing was misplaced

Misery had settled in,
Deep in my own sorrow
Engulfed by depression,

I never had a chance,
a chance to be me

He looked at me once
I looked at him twice
and I was set free

Found that great thing
The joy in my heart

Joy to be free
Joy to be me

Happiness has set in
and I am ready to begin

My new life


© Copyright 1999 candace - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 12-10-1999 08:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, Candace! Very very nice!

 Denise


caroline
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2 posted 12-10-1999 08:46 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Enjoyed this much, Candace...and wishing you the best in your new beginning!  



 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

WhtDove
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3 posted 12-14-1999 10:39 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I liked this. And Welcome to Passions!
Funny how something like that can give you just what you need to go on!

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Jesus is the reason for the season

RainbowGirl
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4 posted 12-15-1999 08:43 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

If most didn't see one always made up of two...then being happy as one, two will always be sheer magic.. )

HUGS

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...


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