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Thistles and Orchids

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 12-10-1999 06:07 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

      Thistles and orchids

  Time works an infinate loom,
Of thistles, orchids and bloom.
     With stages of verve
     And odors that stir,
       Laced in a frame,
       Of uncertain aim.
      And we cannot amend
       What ever the end.


[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 12-10-1999).]
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JOY 14
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1 posted 12-10-1999 07:05 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

I liked this one, Seymour!  Short, simple, but with depth.  The subject is very nice also!  The title caught my eye!  

 JOY

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2 posted 12-10-1999 08:01 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh how true! Great poem, Seymour. I love how your mind works!  

 Denise


Nan
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3 posted 12-10-1999 08:55 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

This says volumes in one short stanza, Sy.... Great job, my friend....
caroline
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4 posted 12-10-1999 08:58 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

  Most excellent, Sir!  

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

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5 posted 12-10-1999 08:59 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

And your poetry is like a forest fire that embraces but does not destroy - marvellous!

  K

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6 posted 12-10-1999 09:00 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well done once more, Sy.

 To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world.

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 12-10-1999 11:37 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Joy14,
Thank you so much for the read and comment.
Denise,
Love your mind too.
Nan,
And you are my dear friend. *L*
Caroline,
Excellent, couldn't be better. *L*
Severn,
You come up with the nicest remarks. *L*
Balladeer,
Well done is all I ask, thanks.
Alwye
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8 posted 12-11-1999 12:08 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wow, wonderful work....what talent you possess.  I love it.  

 *Krista Knutson*

"I can feel you breathe, it's washing over me, and suddenly I'm melting into you..." ~Faith Hill: Breathe~

Severn
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9 posted 12-11-1999 02:12 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

And the thing is, Sy - I only say what I mean. So keep the poetic fire burning OK?

K
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 12-11-1999 04:06 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Alwye,
Thanks a bunch for the WOW.
Severn,
I know you do and I will. *L*
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11 posted 12-11-1999 04:52 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Touches my heart this does.

 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
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Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 12-11-1999 06:12 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

DE,
I'm flattered, That is not easy to do.
Thank you.
 
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