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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 1999-12-10 06:07 PM

      Thistles and orchids

  Time works an infinate loom,
Of thistles, orchids and bloom.
     With stages of verve
     And odors that stir,
       Laced in a frame,
       Of uncertain aim.
      And we cannot amend
       What ever the end.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 12-10-1999).]

JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22

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Wisconsin USA

1 posted 1999-12-10 07:05 PM

I liked this one, Seymour! Short, simple, but with depth. The subject is very nice also! The title caught my eye!

JOY

Denise

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2 posted 1999-12-10 08:01 PM

Oh how true! Great poem, Seymour. I love how your mind works!

Denise

Nan

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3 posted 1999-12-10 08:55 PM

This says volumes in one short stanza, Sy.... Great job, my friend....

caroline
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4 posted 1999-12-10 08:58 PM

Most excellent, Sir!

It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

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5 posted 1999-12-10 08:59 PM

And your poetry is like a forest fire that embraces but does not destroy - marvellous!

K

[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 12-10-1999).]

Balladeer

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6 posted 1999-12-10 09:00 PM

Well done once more, Sy.

To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

7 posted 1999-12-10 11:37 PM

Joy14,
Thank you so much for the read and comment.
Denise,
Love your mind too.
Nan,
And you are my dear friend. *L*
Caroline,
Excellent, couldn't be better. *L*
Severn,
You come up with the nicest remarks. *L*
Balladeer,
Well done is all I ask, thanks.

Alwye

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In the space between moments

8 posted 1999-12-11 12:08 PM

Wow, wonderful work....what talent you possess. I love it.

*Krista Knutson*

"I can feel you breathe, it's washing over me, and suddenly I'm melting into you..." ~Faith Hill: Breathe~

Severn
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9 posted 1999-12-11 02:12 AM

And the thing is, Sy - I only say what I mean. So keep the poetic fire burning OK?

K

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

10 posted 1999-12-11 04:06 PM

Alwye,
Thanks a bunch for the WOW.
Severn,
I know you do and I will. *L*

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

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11 posted 1999-12-11 04:52 PM

Touches my heart this does.

Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 1999-12-11 06:12 PM

DE,
I'm flattered, That is not easy to do.
Thank you.

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