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Kevin
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0 posted 12-10-1999 05:09 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

Clear my mind of all of this,
Let me fall into your gaze.
Show me life with just one kiss,
Burn away this lonely haze.

Show yourself for who you are,
From the shadows rise above.
For I have traveled very far,
But you must walk into my love.


 The two most waisted things in life are time and potential, I have both and not a clue what to do with them.
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1 posted 12-10-1999 05:36 PM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

Kevin, Beautiful poem.  
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2 posted 12-10-1999 06:50 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

lovely! the last few step sometimes matter the most, don't they?

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

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Nicely said, Kevin..."Let me fall into your gaze." and "But you must walk into my love." are fresh, beautiful; images. Good work  
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Beautiful, Kevin!

 Denise


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5 posted 12-10-1999 08:42 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Beautiful!  Bravo, Kev! Simply and elegantly stated  

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

 
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