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Dolphins3
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since 09-30-1999
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Wisconsin


0 posted 12-10-1999 03:08 PM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dolphins3


The truth is deep within
That is where you must begin
Facing all your fears
Before the truth appears
You know it must begin
Because you can't stop the spin
Out of Control
Feeling life take it's toll
The smiles fading away
Leaving only dark and grey
Time to begin
And let the sunshine in
© Copyright 1999 Cheryl Beth - All Rights Reserved
Nate Dogg
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since 11-15-1999
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1 posted 12-10-1999 04:16 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

That was a nice and well-thought poem. Thanks for respond to my poem too.
It seems kind of hard to get a response on this website. It seems as if everyone overlooks your poem and go towards the popular poets. All I want is to give an underdog a chance because my poems are just as good as all of these poets on this board.
I rest my case. Peace!!
Dolphins3
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Posts 142
Wisconsin


2 posted 12-11-1999 11:49 AM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

Thanks Nate. Give Passions a chance. Have a great day.  
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 12-11-1999 12:41 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Dolphin3 -
Lovely sentiments expressed here.
Much sunshine from within shining here!

*A note to NateDogg:
The 'popular' poets to which you allude
are not hesitant at replying to other poets works.  The key to getting a response to yours is in sharing a moment of your thoughtful responses to others.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com
lostboy
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since 11-21-1999
Posts 284
New Hampshire, USA


4 posted 12-11-1999 12:51 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Well said D3, let the sunshine in! Loved your poem and KEEP SMILING!!!
Ohme
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Texas


5 posted 12-11-1999 01:04 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Where the light is lurking, truth is easier to see!
Denise
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6 posted 12-11-1999 02:14 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice! I enjoyed this so much!

 Denise


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