The truth is deep within That is where you must begin Facing all your fears Before the truth appears You know it must begin Because you can't stop the spin Out of Control Feeling life take it's toll The smiles fading away Leaving only dark and grey Time to begin And let the sunshine in
That was a nice and well-thought poem. Thanks for respond to my poem too. It seems kind of hard to get a response on this website. It seems as if everyone overlooks your poem and go towards the popular poets. All I want is to give an underdog a chance because my poems are just as good as all of these poets on this board. I rest my case. Peace!!
Dolphin3 - Lovely sentiments expressed here. Much sunshine from within shining here!
*A note to NateDogg: The 'popular' poets to which you allude are not hesitant at replying to other poets works. The key to getting a response to yours is in sharing a moment of your thoughtful responses to others.
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