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Perfect World

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Nate Dogg
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0 posted 12-10-1999 11:46 AM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

This poem depicts how I really feel.

A perfect world, is something that I desire.
A perfect world, is something that the Lord didn't require.
A perfect world, is a world with no crime
and no knowledge of time.
I guess that I'm too foolish to see that my concept of life could never be.
But as we can see,
that everyone is not happy.
Naturally me,
I just wanna be happy.
By now, I should have already accepted the ultimatum
of what the world will never become.

 Nathan
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Dolphins3
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1 posted 12-10-1999 05:28 PM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

Nate, I think we all wish the world would be like this. Nice poem. Keep up the great work.  
JOY 14
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If the world were perfect there would be no room for improvment!  Although, I too wish it were a perfect place in which to live.  Or at least a place with a lot less problems.  

 JOY

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Nate - Interesting look at the world.
I find that 'perfect' is unachievable
therefore ... we must make it what we
want it to be.

This complicated world
in which we reside
gives us all the chance
to take a chance
and therefore
stand
side by side.

Accepting the
ultimate of time
life is what we make it,
friend of mine.



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Ohme
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To strive for perfection is not bad if it does not leave you heartbroken if not achieved. Me, I accept the best effort, even if it falls short of perfection. Aim for a star and hit the moon is still a pretty good achievement! Nice poem.
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