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Mak It last forever

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vandana
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0 posted 12-10-1999 11:24 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


This is my heaven ,
Come to me
And you make my dreams come true,
You brought me heaven,
Beneath the sky besides sea,
This is my heaven when you come to me,
This is my dreams,
Being close with you,
The stars above,
You holding my hand,
Make It last foever,
You gave your love to me,
The stars shone all night,
As we make It last forever,
You held me tight,
As you were loving me,
You were mine forever,
Untill the time was right for us,
You're my world,
As you love me,
You gave me heaven,
You came closer to me,
And make It last forever,
© Copyright 1999 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Betty Gravitt
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1 posted 12-10-1999 01:12 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

this is wonderful Vandana. I enjoy your work very much.

 B Gravitt


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2 posted 12-11-1999 03:21 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely thoughts, Vandana. Lovely!

 Denise


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