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Among My Souvenirs
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Among My Souvenirs |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Among My Souvenirs ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 Tucked away and treasured by this heart of mine, are souvenirs of you collected for a long, long time. The first promise you made, given in young love's first bloom. The rose pressed in the Bible, a verse, within it's petals loom. A football program, pages screaming VICTORY ! A dried corsage, lifeless now, but a memory from you to me. The class ring you gave when we first proclaimed to others the love that we were feeling ... a love like no other. The cards, the photographs, the poems scrawled in haste. The souvenirs of the love, that never went to waste. After all these years when I shared these keepers with you. You smiled and shook your head, then you said ... 'Is it any wonder I love you like I do !' The best souvenir you ever gave me, I wear within my heart. Love freely given ... I thank you for that part. You are the glue that keeps us together, with your thoughtful, loving ways. Thanks for the memories of loving you. I will ....... for always. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How lovely! *S* Well done! |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Marge this is lovely.  B Gravitt |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thanks from Pennsylvania for the Poem and the memories Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
How beautiful..........another poet in Pennsylvania seconds Elizabeth's comments |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
How about a poet from NH! Wonderful verses Marge! I enjoyed it sooo much. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
And this FLORIDA poet thanks each of you for your thoughtful comments. Suthern - Many thanks. Betty - Glad to share. Elizabeth, my friend - Sharing with friends everywhere ... my pleasure. Hoot - I like this ... knowing where everyone is ... thanks. LostBoy - You too ... thanks NH ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
Marge, Very beautiful poem. What a very special love you share. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely souvenirs! Very nice, Marge! Denise |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Beautiful poem Marge. Nicely done. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
And this far far away New Zealand poet thinks you have created another lovely picture! K |
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Rod Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 149Auckland New Zealand |
Severn is not the only New Zealand poet who thinks this is lovely! Well done indeed! Rod |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Amazingly profound message to this piece. It likes me well. Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dolphin3 - Thanks ... Denise - I knew you'd like 'plundering' with me through my souvenirs. Eloise - Sooooo glad you liked it. Severn - And my Zealander friend ... thank you. Rod - So glad that you found it pleasing. Thank you. DreamEvil - Thanks for seeing deeply into this piece and liking it. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
I think you have a treasure!! |
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