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He Is There

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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 12-10-1999 07:37 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

He Is There

I am here, and he is there
The spirit is so full aware
And visits with him every night
To soothe its vacant, weary plight

Then soul to soul the duo meet
And mind to mind the two complete
But my heart cries a weary tear
That he is there, and I am here

Though comforts in its soft aware
That he is always there

Elizabeth Santos


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1 posted 12-10-1999 08:11 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

How true... it's such a comfort knowing he's there... and such a sorrow that he's THERE instead of beside you. *S* Great job!
Betty Gravitt
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2 posted 12-10-1999 08:25 AM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

Elizabeth thank you. (((HUGS)))

 B Gravitt


Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 12-10-1999 09:44 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Betty and Suthern,
Looks like this hit a chord
Glad you liked it
Liz
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4 posted 12-10-1999 10:52 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Yes, my friend,you have struck a chord. . . one whose music I have not heard in a while... thank you. . .

Beautiful, as always. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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5 posted 12-10-1999 08:51 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful! Very very lovely!

 Denise


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6 posted 12-10-1999 08:54 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Ah Liz - this is beautiful.
Simple, yet rich.
Great work.  K
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Lovely Elizabeth!

 <*\\\><
Jesus is the reason for the season

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 12-14-1999 11:07 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Elizabeth,
This something I would steal.
Exquisite.
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 12-15-1999 06:02 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Elizabeth,
This gem should not be allowed to fade away.
It is not my say alone, but every say. *L*
Elizabeth Santos
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10 posted 12-15-1999 06:15 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Thank you all for the compliments on such a simple verse.
Sy,
'twould be a very foolish steal
for one whose talent is the real
thank you
Liz
 
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