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About waking up

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Master
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0 posted 12-09-1999 10:46 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I dream of dreaming that I dreamt
About the masterís masterpiece
Of which, I could not understand
A single theme, a single piece.
I think I thought about a thought
Which headed right out of my head,
And for a second it was caught
Just for a second, then it fled.
And in that second, I remember
Remembering what I had lost,
I even thought that thought surrendered
But it was heading for the coast
To stop that thought, I stopped to think
And lacking thought, I brought it back
Just as the thought began to spring,
The clock alarm had woke me up



 I fell in love and kept on falling
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-09-1999 11:12 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Some dream! This is so entertaining, Master! I love it!  

 Denise


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2 posted 12-10-1999 12:35 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Wow !
You weave a nice dream.
Guess that make you the
Dream Weaver.
Nice, nice job here.


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3 posted 12-10-1999 06:01 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Lovely play with words, Master.
Master
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4 posted 12-10-1999 09:18 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks everybody!
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5 posted 12-10-1999 09:22 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

I like I like I like!!!  Love the word play  

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

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6 posted 12-10-1999 10:05 PM       View Profile for paperguardian   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for paperguardian

Whoa - what a dream sequence!  This pulls you through the words until you forget that it was a dream.  I especially liked the word repetition, it makes the poem flow beautifully!   Again -- great job!  
 
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