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Acceptance |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Acceptance Emotions and oceans entwined, Sand and mind combined. The key from the cradle of the sea. By its grace we live you and me. Death strikes, a stone on a pond, After the crash the ripples respond, The troth, the cave, the wave And viscus remorse the slave. At the rim, millennium And we are locked the stadium. The jewel is hope the mediate, With moon and the stars the opiate. Acceptance, sustains. Acceptance, remains. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sy, You know you can always get me with a story from the deep blue.....   |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Acceptance - sometimes a hard place to get to. But it's the only place to be. Wonderful, Seymour! Denise |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Great, wonderful work of art. Acceptance is one thing most people stive for If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Your work is always compelling, wonderful job, Sy. Michael |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Seems you have a tongue for the philosophical of late, Sy. I like it - as deep as the sea perhaps... K |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I accept this Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, I am a water person too I am an aquarius. Denise the sweet, Acceptance is hard, true but a good way to survive. Thank you. Lynn, Thank you for the comp and read. Michael, Thank you, your comments mean much. Severn, This poem is for people like you. *L* Liz, Very clever, *L* *L* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, I forgot to meantion how beautiful a poem this is, I was so wrapped in its meaning. It is so beautiful. Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderful..............as always |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
It's amazing how the sea and the lake can insipre such thoughts. .. Well done Sy. .. That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Acceptance is the thing we all look for. Beautiful as always Seymour. B Gravitt |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Liz, Beauty always recognizes beauty. *L* Hoot, Wonderful from the wonderful, thank you. Sven, You are right, thanks for the well done. Betty, You too are right, thank you so much. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sy, you are too kind. K |
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