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Into My Life You Came

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Eloise
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0 posted 12-09-1999 10:17 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Eloise

Am I who you thought I'd be?
For you've brought out the hidden me.
I kept things locked inside myself.
And placed my heart upon a shelf.

Then one day into my life you came.
And my heart you did quickly claim.
For twenty five years you have been by my side.
And in this heart you will always reside.

We laughed, we smiled, we shared.
We loved, we cried, we cared.
To each other we had to adjust.
But most important we had trust.

Your gentle disposition is one of the best.
To live this long with me, you surely passed the test.
When I go off on a tangent and rant and rave.
You sit back and chuckle, brush it off with a wave.

Your loving spirit is warm and kind.
A real treasure in you, I did find.
We have lived and loved together for so long.
And with each other is where we will always belong.

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This was written for a very special person - my husband, my best friend Patrick

© Copyright 1999 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
Betty Gravitt
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1 posted 12-09-1999 10:22 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

Beautiful Eloise. Does he know how lucky he is?  

 B Gravitt


Denise
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2 posted 12-09-1999 11:05 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, Eloise! Sounds like the perfect relationship!

 Denise


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3 posted 12-09-1999 11:41 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

'my husband - my best friend'....when those two comments lay side by side, you are blessed. Congrats to you both.

 To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world.

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4 posted 12-10-1999 12:08 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Betty -  It's pretty obvious that Patrick is a very lucky man ... and knows it !
Nicely put.


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WhtDove
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WOW! This was really touching. What a blessing it is indeed to have a relationship like that.
Eloise
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6 posted 12-10-1999 01:08 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Denise - I think it is
Balladeer, WhtDove - Thank you
Betty, Marge - Trust me, I am the lucky one.  I think I came out with the better deal.
Severn
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7 posted 12-10-1999 05:57 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Another lovely, Eloise.
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