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Tease Me ... Please Me ... And You Do

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Marge Tindal
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Tease Me ... Please Me ... And You Do
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

You start with gentle caresses.
Slowly working your way
to the very parts that
await your touch.

I am putty in your hands.
Sculptor that you are,
you run your fingers over the wet clay ...
taking me away.

Manipulating, kneading,
slowly bringing me
to the desired temperature.

Once over ...
all over.
Taking little,
giving much.

A gentleness that
takes me to the rim ...
not beyond.
Not yet.

You play.
You stay.
You delight me
in every way.

I am rising to your touch.
Warming to the heat.
Suddenly more fervent gestures
stimulate me to peak.

Rising, falling.
Rising again.
Lost amidst the
sweet surrender.

Wanting more.
Giving no less.
You return to places
already caressed.

Again, again ...
I sigh for the end.
It subsides,
but returns,
like the waves with the tide.

Covering me again
in your power,
you bring me to completion.
Then you hold me close
and start over again.



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com
© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 12-09-1999 09:08 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Marge,
You had some lines that just sang,
The paint was great and my bell rang. *L*
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 12-09-1999 09:11 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Didn't I tell you she exposes her love life to the world? Marge, is there anything you're holding back from us? This poem was almost expicit but quite exquisite.
Liz
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3 posted 12-09-1999 09:20 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, call me MichaelAngelo.
I'll even act like Picasso.
Around your flagpole I will rally
If you ever want to Dali!

Marge, this is quite a poem! Very stimulating to the, er, mind! Well done.

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 12-09-1999).]
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4 posted 12-09-1999 09:31 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

Marge just two words... "go girl"

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Marge Tindal
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5 posted 12-09-1999 11:53 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Why, friends.  Thank you so very much for enjoying a rendering of the simple task of making HOMEMADE BREAD AND YEAST ROLLS !
Mixing, kneading, letting rise, kneading again, covering to rise ... shaped again,
completed by the baking ... then enjoyed
again.

Whatever were you thinking?  
Ah, the minds of poets !
Words take us where we let them, don't they?


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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Or maybe, just maybe
a sculptor working his clay.
Shaping and molding ...
never quite content.
Wondering, as he dampens
the cloth and covers it each night,
if it will respond to his kneading
touch on the next round.
The clay cries out ...
make me ...
bring me to completion.
Make me ... bake me.
The sculptor does ...
and then slides his hands
once more over the piece ...
both of them content at last.

*Could be !  

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Martie
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Marge, you are such a tease--bread...I don't think so, but if that's what you want us to believe....I loved the poem which ever way it reads.
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8 posted 12-10-1999 12:10 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, Marge, that's the YEAST you can do!!!

As far as creating a statue, well, this poem does do that!
hoot_owl_rn
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Okay Girl....you keep these up you're going to have to move on over to adult  

Another nice one  
Michael
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Bread rolls, huh?  I ain't even gonna touch on that one.  Great poem, *shaking head*, "and I'm the Pilsbury Dough Boy!"


Michael
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Dear me, and poor me thought you were talking about eating chocolate!!! Sigh - and it was mere bread...

Care for Vienna sausage, Marge?



Great writing, my friend!
Elizabeth Santos
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Marge is so completely free
I wish she lived next door to me
I'd laugh my head off every day
With stories of her potter's clay
 
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