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In memory of Lukas 12/11/99

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Dolphins3
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0 posted 12-09-1999 03:26 PM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dolphins3


I wrote this for my bestfriend. She lost her little brother this past weekend. 12\11\99


Bestfriend of mine
I wish I could take away the pain
But it will only go with time

Think of him
With smiles on his face
The cute little dimples that no one can replace


Remember when he was little
And was a pain in the butt
Hold the memories close to your heart


For now his place is in heaven
Watching down on you
So don't be sad or blue


With wings of an angel
You will soar high
For all to see in the midnight sky


At sixteen you were far too young
But accidents happen
To God you were brung


You will always be in our hearts
For you have brought much joy
I'm sorry to say this Goodbye......


© Copyright 1999 Cheryl Beth - All Rights Reserved
Jewl_24_1999
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1 posted 12-09-1999 03:55 PM       View Profile for Jewl_24_1999   Email Jewl_24_1999   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Jewl_24_1999

very beautiful, and sad.  My thoughts are with her and you.
Severn
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2 posted 12-09-1999 08:16 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Truly sad.
Hugs.
Elizabeth Santos
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since 11-08-1999
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3 posted 12-09-1999 09:14 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

This was a warm and gentle hug for your friend
Liz
Kelly McGathen
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4 posted 12-09-1999 09:34 PM       View Profile for Kelly McGathen   Email Kelly McGathen   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Kelly McGathen

THAT WAS A BEAUTIFUL TRIBUTE TO DYING TOO YOUNG.


 
Dolphins3
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5 posted 12-09-1999 11:25 PM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

Thank you for the warm thoughts and hugs. They are truely appericated.
danni
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since 11-20-1999
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6 posted 12-10-1999 02:07 AM       View Profile for danni   Email danni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for danni

A beautiful tribute. I lost a dear friend if mine who was more like a pesky older brother. This poem brought tears to my eyes. I know the feeling that comes with this kind of loss. My heart goes out to you and your friend.
hoot_owl_rn
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So sad, my heart goes out to all.
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