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Dolphins3
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since 1999-09-30
Posts 135
Wisconsin

0 posted 1999-12-09 03:26 PM



I wrote this for my bestfriend. She lost her little brother this past weekend. 12\11\99


Bestfriend of mine
I wish I could take away the pain
But it will only go with time

Think of him
With smiles on his face
The cute little dimples that no one can replace


Remember when he was little
And was a pain in the butt
Hold the memories close to your heart


For now his place is in heaven
Watching down on you
So don't be sad or blue


With wings of an angel
You will soar high
For all to see in the midnight sky


At sixteen you were far too young
But accidents happen
To God you were brung


You will always be in our hearts
For you have brought much joy
I'm sorry to say this Goodbye......



© Copyright 1999 Cheryl Beth - All Rights Reserved
Jewl_24_1999
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since 1999-10-24
Posts 64
USA
1 posted 1999-12-09 03:55 PM


very beautiful, and sad.  My thoughts are with her and you.
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

2 posted 1999-12-09 08:16 PM


Truly sad.
Hugs.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
3 posted 1999-12-09 09:14 PM


This was a warm and gentle hug for your friend
Liz

Kelly McGathen
New Member
since 1999-12-09
Posts 1
Ft. Lauderdale, Florida
4 posted 1999-12-09 09:34 PM


THAT WAS A BEAUTIFUL TRIBUTE TO DYING TOO YOUNG.


 

Dolphins3
Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135
Wisconsin
5 posted 1999-12-09 11:25 PM


Thank you for the warm thoughts and hugs. They are truely appericated.
danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
6 posted 1999-12-10 02:07 AM


A beautiful tribute. I lost a dear friend if mine who was more like a pesky older brother. This poem brought tears to my eyes. I know the feeling that comes with this kind of loss. My heart goes out to you and your friend.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
7 posted 1999-12-10 10:26 AM


So sad, my heart goes out to all.
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