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Thinking about you

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vandana
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0 posted 12-09-1999 11:06 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


I never stop thinking about you,
I never stop loving you,
Even though you're far away,
But when I sat down on my bed,
Guitar on my hand,
Paper was on my lap,
The lights are on,
The night is cold,
The breeze through my window,,
The days are hoter in summer,
I never stop loving you,
When you're not here with me,
Writing songs in a memories of yesterday,
Wish you were here holding my hand ,
And would sing songs of yesterday,
One warm sunny day,
You and I were there holding  hands,
We used to talk and laugh,
Those meemories linger on my mind,
As the wind blows,
Seee your lovely face,
I know there;s no place to hide our love,
Though I know I was still missing you,
And knowing you won't be here with me,
But I still think about you,
Day and night,
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Denise
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1 posted 12-09-1999 01:22 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This would be great set to music!  

 Denise


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I agree with d.  Many a night I have spent with a pad of paper on my lap, alone with my thoughts.  I really liked this, vandana.  Nice work.

 Jim

"If I rest, I rust." -Martin Luther

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