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The Jackal
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0 posted 12-09-1999 01:08 AM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

please say no
dont fall in
this is nothing
from what i bring
connect the swirling lines
burst upon the sun and speak to it
of what you have become
and hope it falls over you
as i do...




 
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1 posted 12-09-1999 02:49 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I'm trying to grasp the center of your poem and I can't - a poem with mystery is great!

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