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Seaangel
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since 1999-07-27
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0 posted 1999-12-08 11:25 PM


moonlight/daylight
whispers in.
Does she stand turning
in cocksure circles,
breathing brine;
hopping from one smooth
toe-drawn shape
to the next?
Does the air wash over her
& turn her into a palette
of sparkling colour,
crimson, viridian, yellow
& ochre?
Do the bells of time
follow her movements?
Does she breathe openly
as she sleeps?
Does she bravely go
where she has never gone
before?


[This message has been edited by Seaangel (edited 12-08-1999).]

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1 posted 1999-12-08 11:29 PM


SeaAngel -
This is so picturesque.
Lovely.


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Denise
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2 posted 1999-12-09 12:00 PM


Yes, Seaangel, quite a lovely picture here! Very well done!  

 Denise



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