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I Wish She Does.

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Seaangel
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moonlight/daylight
whispers in.
Does she stand turning
in cocksure circles,
breathing brine;
hopping from one smooth
toe-drawn shape
to the next?
Does the air wash over her
& turn her into a palette
of sparkling colour,
crimson, viridian, yellow
& ochre?
Do the bells of time
follow her movements?
Does she breathe openly
as she sleeps?
Does she bravely go
where she has never gone
before?


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1 posted 12-08-1999 11:29 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

SeaAngel -
This is so picturesque.
Lovely.


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Yes, Seaangel, quite a lovely picture here! Very well done!  

 Denise


 
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