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Something more than time

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paperguardian
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0 posted 12-08-1999 10:38 PM       View Profile for paperguardian   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for paperguardian


Here's to the dream,
and here's to the chance,
of living noble love,
of making this our dance.

Across the boundaries,
marked highways and hills,
that blesses with promise,
then breathlessly stills:

This heavenly plan,
that is envied by time,
of more number than the sand
one word more than rhyme.

Without hand upon hand,
that the distances part,
I will love you my best,
by heart bound to heart.
© Copyright 1999 paperguardian - All Rights Reserved
Seaangel
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1 posted 12-08-1999 11:04 PM       View Profile for Seaangel   Email Seaangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seaangel

Beautiful, paper. I just hope the dream makes it! Good luck!
WhtDove
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2 posted 12-08-1999 11:27 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

WELCOME   I just love that second stanza. And a big good luck from me too!

 <*\\\><
Jesus is the reason for the season

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 12-08-1999 11:32 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

PaperGuardian -
'heart bound to heart'
Breathless!


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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4 posted 12-08-1999 11:57 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

So lovely, paperguardian. Beautifully done! Welcome to Passions! You're gonna love it here!  

 Denise


Poet deVine
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5 posted 12-09-1999 12:06 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Gee, this is the second poem of yours I've read..and you know what! This one's as good as the first! I like it! Make yourself at home, hope you plan to stay awhile!  
Skyfyre
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6 posted 12-09-1999 12:14 AM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Lines seven and eight were my favorites, but the whole thing was well done.  Here's to the dream, indeed.

--Kess


 You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.


hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 12-09-1999 12:25 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful  
paperguardian
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8 posted 12-09-1999 07:17 AM       View Profile for paperguardian   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for paperguardian

Thanks to everyone!  
Seaangel- the luck is well received, I need it for this dream!
WhtDove- Thanks for the welcome and the luck!
Marge and dsnyder- glad you liked it and thanks for such a warm welcome!
Poet deVine- I think I'll settle in- I really love it here!  
Skyfyre- I liked those two lines the best too!  
hoot_owl_rn-thanks for the praise!
Pepper
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9 posted 12-09-1999 08:10 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

This piece is simply Wonderful Paperguardian....
Welcome to Passions!!

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


FreeByrd
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10 posted 12-20-1999 03:22 PM       View Profile for FreeByrd   Email FreeByrd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit FreeByrd's Home Page   View IP for FreeByrd

Here's to the dream,
and here's to the chance

I'm a dreamer and a risk taker. With lines like this you will always be able to reel me in for a read.

Nicely done PG. Liked... Alot...  

 There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief

There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief

- Hendrix


samsonheart
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11 posted 12-20-1999 06:15 PM       View Profile for samsonheart   Email samsonheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for samsonheart

What a wonderful talent you have, I hope to read much more from you, I really enjoyed this one.

samsonheart
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 12-20-1999 06:22 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Paperguardian,
Excellent last stanza and poem.
Elizabeth Santos
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13 posted 12-20-1999 06:29 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Yes, I agree with Sy, The last verse is beautiful!
Great poem!
Liz
Martie
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14 posted 12-21-1999 10:52 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This is a beautiful poem--very well written from beginning to end.

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)
starboards
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15 posted 12-21-1999 11:48 AM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

I have to agree with everyone...great poem even if it is your secound...i'm willing to read more, so please dont stop posting...

Starboards

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"
passing shadows
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16 posted 04-15-2005 05:43 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

great write!
Artic Wind
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17 posted 11-12-2007 06:49 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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