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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-12-08 10:22 PM


You Are My Night
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

In the soft dark of night
you do it just right.
I'm aglow again.

You work real slow
to begin the glow
and then you quicken the pace.

I love to see
you looking at me,
with that special look in your eyes.

I give back one on one
the pleasures you've done,
and gain more than my share.

In loving you so intensely,
the feeling immensly,
is gratification for me.

We pause
for the cause ...
and loving is resumed again.

How you do
what you do,
just makes me want you more.

So I begin
again ...
and so do you.

When we are content,
our passion spent.
It starts to peak once more.

You fill me with love,
take me further above,
to places I've not yet been.

We ride the tide
until passion subsides.
Tomorrow we'll start it again.



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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1 posted 1999-12-08 10:35 PM


There are two people in this world I envy...Tiger Woods and whoever is in this poem with you.

 To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world.


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2 posted 1999-12-08 10:38 PM


Well - doesn't Balladeer get around Marge?  

Ah, the passion...great writing.

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 1999-12-08 10:42 PM


Balladeer -  

You have Tiger beat
on every link.
He may play the circuit
but ......
he's PAR FOR THE COURSE.

I'll caddy for YOU anytime.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 1999-12-08 10:46 PM


Oh, hi Severn.
Is Balladeer around?
I hadn't noticed.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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5 posted 1999-12-08 11:18 PM


No line comes to mind that wouldn't get me banned to the adult site for life! I shall thereFORE say goodnight to all!

 To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world.


Marge Tindal
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6 posted 1999-12-08 11:27 PM


Balladeer -

BeFORE you go
be sure to PLAY
another round.

Bye - Bye BIRDIE !


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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