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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-12-08 10:20 PM


You Are My Morning
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

In the early mist of morning,
quite without a warning ...
thoughts of you did come to me.

In the light of day,
I tucked them all away...
to be savored again.

Later in the night,
when the timing was just right,
I revisited the thoughts of you.

I found immense pleasure in knowing,
that the seeds we were sowing,
would bloom again.

Among my worldly treasures
you give me immense pleasures.
I love what you do to me.

When you hold me tight
long into the night,
I know that I am loved.

On the dawns first breaking,
the pleasures that you're making,
take my breath away.

You cause me to surrender,
to your love so tender.
And again I turn to you.

We continue the love-making
until after the taking,
then we do it all over again.

Neither of us able,
to leave love's table ...
until the coffee is brewed.

And even still
one cup to our fill ...
we return to the loving again.

How I love the morning,
when you take me without warning
and do it over and over again.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 1999-12-08 10:23 PM


Gee, thanks again, Marge. Another sleepless night ahead!!

 To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world.


Eloise
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2 posted 1999-12-08 10:24 PM


Aren't mornings wonderful?  Nice read Marge.
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 1999-12-08 10:31 PM


Balladeer -

Have you been having trouble sleeping?
Probably all those cold showers !
Nytol !


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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4 posted 1999-12-08 10:34 PM


Eloise -
YES !  That's a definite YES, mornings
are exceptionally WONDERFUL !
Thanks for liking this.
Do you have a towel we could give
Balladeer ?  


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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5 posted 1999-12-08 10:40 PM


You know, there is an adult forum for miscreants like you two...

LOL.

The two companion pieces suit each other well.

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6 posted 1999-12-08 10:52 PM




I'm fine, Marge. Don't worry about me. I'll be ok. Cool, calm and collectible, that's me. Just hangin' aroung for a bit. That's all. YOU EVIL PERSON!!!!

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7 posted 1999-12-08 10:53 PM


Severn -  
Adult forum?
My browser security settings don't let
me go there.  I'm banished forever to
the confines of the shower room !  LOL !
Glad you liked both pieces.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 1999-12-08 11:02 PM


Balladeer -
I can tell you're
!
Like I said ...
probably all those cold showers !


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Betty Gravitt
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9 posted 1999-12-08 11:06 PM


Marge I agree, mornings are the best thing that ever happens to me. I like this very much. I keep learnig from all of you. Thanks.  
Denise
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10 posted 1999-12-09 12:26 PM


Sounds like a great way to start the day!  

 Denise



Marge Tindal
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11 posted 1999-12-09 08:12 AM


Good morning, Betty.
Aren't mornings just the greatest !
Enjoy your visits with us.
---------------------------------------------
Denise -
Don't you just know it gal !
Love to you this beautiful morn.
---------------------------------------------
*Morning YOU !


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Pepper
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12 posted 1999-12-09 08:58 AM


Sounds like the best of mornings to me Marge  
Very Lovely.......

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!



Iloveit
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13 posted 1999-12-09 02:30 PM


loved this, so beautifully done, and ....
ROFG@balladeer hanging around

Iloveit
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14 posted 1999-12-09 02:30 PM


loved this, so beautifully done, and ....
ROFG@balladeer hanging around

Dolphins3
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15 posted 1999-12-09 03:37 PM


Marge, Very beautiful poem. I enjoyed it alot. Thanks
hoot_owl_rn
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16 posted 1999-12-09 06:41 PM


Mmmmm....would like to start my morning like that...lol, now all I got to do is find someone  
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