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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 12-08-1999 10:11 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

          It is so    

Aromas float
Enchanted darkness.
Fish swim among the lotus.

Crickets chirp.
The breeze caresses.
Fantasies take our hand.

Unseen presence
Lifts the spirit
Phantoms lead our minds.

The lips pucker to the taste.
The door to everwhere
Is open.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-08-1999 10:16 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, Seymour! Just beautiful!  

 Denise


Sally S.
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2 posted 12-08-1999 10:24 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

So it is.
Simple and meaningful.  Well done, Sy.  
Nan
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...and so be it!...
WhtDove
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You've said much! Short and to the point. Beautiful it is Seymour!

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5 posted 12-08-1999 11:37 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour -
You 'open' many 'doors'
Inspirational words from you
are always a pleasure to see.

I really like
'unseen presence lifts the spirit'
How very, very true.


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6 posted 12-09-1999 12:11 AM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

"The door to everywhere is open ..."

A beautiful line, and a beautiful poem.  

--Kess


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Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 12-09-1999 05:33 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Would that the mind could follow the spirit
Liz
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8 posted 12-09-1999 05:43 AM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

Seymour this is wonderful. " the door to everywhere is open". What a wonderful thought to begin my day with.  

 B Gravitt


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9 posted 12-09-1999 05:48 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

and what a beautiful thought to end my day with!
You are a poet of grace Sy.

K
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10 posted 12-09-1999 05:56 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Sy, you continue to grow as a poet! I really liked this one there is such a depth in these few words! It is so....
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 12-09-1999 08:20 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

To all of the above.
I am overwhelmed by the response to this simple poem. God bless you all.
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12 posted 12-09-1999 08:48 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Simply beautiful Sy....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


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13 posted 12-09-1999 03:33 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Ah, so.
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 12-09-1999 09:03 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Pepper and Sunshine,
To my two beautiful and ah so,
It is so. *L*
Nate Dogg
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15 posted 12-10-1999 12:50 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

I like it and it's really complex.
lostboy
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16 posted 12-10-1999 01:11 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

This is a really cool one Sy. I like it!
 
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