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Forbidden Fate.....................................#1

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Sally S.
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0 posted 12-08-1999 09:47 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sally S.

His name came to me through a gentle summer breeze.
A voice near a whisper. A hearts silent plea.
A magical union powerless through vast space.
Twilight questions of what brought us to this place.

Overwhelming mystery makes it hard to stay away.
A time, a place and where to meet...I would choose the day.
Imprisoned by the longing, fate finally tips his hat.
Four rings you see won't stop us..it's far too late for that.

His eyes capture mine.  First kiss ensued thereafter.
I drown within his soul right then...amidst the nervous laughter.
Abundant time was not ours.  It ended all too soon.
Brief meetings we shall only have each night amongst the moon.



© Copyright 1999 Sally - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-08-1999 10:09 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I loved it then...I love it now. Wonderful heart you have there, Sally!

 To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world.

Denise
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2 posted 12-08-1999 10:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, Sally! So beautiful!  

 Denise


Nan
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3 posted 12-09-1999 07:24 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Yep - Great poem.... and great pic too!!    
Iloveit
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4 posted 12-09-1999 10:28 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

yep will ditto Nan   and add my sighs
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 12-09-1999 01:21 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sally,
I hope that wasn't the finally? Well done enjoyed.
Sally S.
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6 posted 12-10-1999 12:18 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Thank you all...this poem holds a lot of meaning to me.

Mike, you have a pretty wonderful heart yourself, you know.  Thank you.

Nan, I thought I should remove that pic...I look like I'm 12 years old!!!  LOL  Thank you for th compliments.

Denise and loveit, my heartfelt thanks to you both.  

Sy, no this wan't the finale.  That hasn't happened as of yet.  Thank you for the read and reply.  
Betty Gravitt
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7 posted 12-10-1999 01:09 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

Sally very beautiful, and I hope the finale does not come soon.  

 B Gravitt


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This is a beautiful piece and one I can relate to Sally  
btw....I like your pic!  

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


lostboy
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9 posted 12-10-1999 03:04 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

This is very nice work Sally. I'm sure you're right, it won't be the finale.
 
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