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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-12-08 08:01 PM


As time is pouring from the bottle
Last drops of wine into my glass,
Let’s enter through the liquid puddle
I’m sure that there’s a place for us.

Among the clouds’ confusing patterns,
We’ll find the room to build a home
And live together- that’s what matters-
We’ll live together all alone!

And in the backyard, in our garden,
We’ll plant the stars and everyday,
Our dreams will grow with fervent ardor
And lap the mild Milky Way

We’ll live without a single worry
Enthralled in happiness and love
Let all the people read our story
While gazing at us from above

This dream to me has been so thrilling
That even now, I’m still amazed.
And water’s dripping from the ceiling
Into my glass and on my face.




[This message has been edited by Master (edited 12-08-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-12-08 08:13 PM


LOL - get a towel.

Absolutley adore this line: 'And lap the mild milky way'

Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA
2 posted 1999-12-08 08:28 PM


A towel... good idea! Thanks Severn!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-12-08 08:48 PM


I like this Master
Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
4 posted 1999-12-08 09:12 PM


Good poem!- Good poet!
Liz

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-12-08 09:32 PM


Wonderful poem, Master! Love it!  

 Denise



Sally S.
Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847
Ohio
6 posted 1999-12-08 09:54 PM


Well now, this was sweet and silly at the same time! *g* I like it, I like it!

Now, about your picture....you're either a giraffe with wings OR a tall, angelic man??  hmmmmmm pondering...pondering  

Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA
7 posted 1999-12-08 10:04 PM


Thanks Everybody! Sally, I'm the second one...*s*
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