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As time is pouring from the bottle...

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Master
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0 posted 12-08-1999 08:01 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

As time is pouring from the bottle
Last drops of wine into my glass,
Let’s enter through the liquid puddle
I’m sure that there’s a place for us.

Among the clouds’ confusing patterns,
We’ll find the room to build a home
And live together- that’s what matters-
We’ll live together all alone!

And in the backyard, in our garden,
We’ll plant the stars and everyday,
Our dreams will grow with fervent ardor
And lap the mild Milky Way

We’ll live without a single worry
Enthralled in happiness and love
Let all the people read our story
While gazing at us from above

This dream to me has been so thrilling
That even now, I’m still amazed.
And water’s dripping from the ceiling
Into my glass and on my face.




[This message has been edited by Master (edited 12-08-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 12-08-1999 08:13 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

LOL - get a towel.

Absolutley adore this line: 'And lap the mild milky way'
Master
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2 posted 12-08-1999 08:28 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

A towel... good idea! Thanks Severn!
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 12-08-1999 08:48 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I like this Master
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 12-08-1999 09:12 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Good poem!- Good poet!
Liz
Denise
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5 posted 12-08-1999 09:32 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful poem, Master! Love it!  

 Denise


Sally S.
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6 posted 12-08-1999 09:54 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Well now, this was sweet and silly at the same time! *g* I like it, I like it!

Now, about your picture....you're either a giraffe with wings OR a tall, angelic man??  hmmmmmm pondering...pondering  
Master
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7 posted 12-08-1999 10:04 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks Everybody! Sally, I'm the second one...*s*
 
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