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Why would you die for me?

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miriam
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0 posted 12-08-1999 03:43 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for miriam


Do you ever stop to think,
That each time God forgives,
He might have to relive,
The agony he felt on the cross?


What if he feel the nails,
Everytime we fail?
What if he goes through the pain,
All over again?


I'm the one to blame,
Because of me He took the pain.
My side should've been beaten,
My heart should've been broken.


But it's His hands with the scars,
His face the one with tears.
How are you thanking Him...
For saving you?

--You might not believe in God
--But He believes in You.
miriam coronado




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Severn
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1 posted 12-08-1999 04:04 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

This rings with the strength of your belief - I love this.

K
RainbowGirl
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2 posted 12-08-1999 04:07 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

If God believes in me, then he certainly believes in miracles...but I don't believe in God, I do however believe in faith and that faith can be in sunshine, yourself or a different kind of religion but I admire tremendously the thought behind your poem..it must be fantastic to believe so much....enjoy your faith Miriam because I think that's a strength in you!

HUGS


 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...

miriam
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3 posted 12-08-1999 04:28 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

severn...thank you for your reply
R.G.  I totally respect your point of view and thank you for your reply...One question though..You might not believe in God...but do you believe that he made the sun you have faith in?  Do you believe that the rainbow you love so much is a sign he gave us?  Just asking.

--You might not believe in God
--But He believes in You.


  miriam coronado


Tara Simms
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4 posted 12-08-1999 07:21 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Miriam, BEAUTIFUL, inspiring words!  I have several students who don't believe in God.  I love the end of your poem.  I plan on sharing that thought with them!  Excellent work!

 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley


RainbowGirl
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5 posted 12-08-1999 07:28 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Miriam:  Oh my, I think perhaps we are getting out of the realms of poetry here, take it to another board and I'll be happy to share my thoughts with you but I believe it would be wrong to share them here and I was in the wrong to reply as I did here as well..

HUGS

PS: let me know?

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...

miriam
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6 posted 12-10-1999 12:42 AM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

Tara:  Tell me if my humble poetry touches someone...would really boost my self es-steem. I have a little group at church from the ages of 6-9 which I give bible lessons to.  I get my inspiration from my brats.  
R.G. You know my email if you wanna talk...I totally respect your point of view..just wanted to let you know.


--You might not believe in God
--But He believes in You.


  miriam coronado


Denise
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7 posted 12-10-1999 01:02 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, inspiring, and full of His truth! I love it, Miriam!

 Denise


miriam
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8 posted 12-10-1999 01:08 AM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

thanks for the compliments Denise...but most importantly...can you answer the last question...My goal is to touch someones heart..maybe you're the one?

You might not believe in God.
But He believes in You.

  miriam coronado


Echo Rhayne
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9 posted 12-10-1999 05:55 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

This is great, and althoiugh I do believe in God, this touched me greatly, and gave something more to think about...thank you and great poem!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


miriam
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10 posted 12-10-1999 01:12 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

thanks echo! it really means a lot to me to know that it touched you in some way.
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