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Do I love her?

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 12-08-1999 12:28 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

           Do I love her?                          Here lies captured in fragile sleep,
Raptures of a soul in reap.
Eyes, would shade the moon to fair,
A face t'would make an angel stare.
Each sigh of breath, start to start,
Is the rhythm of my heart.
The precious seconds that fly bye,
Are my everything and why.
She is the magna and the core,
All of this and much much more.
A vision and my demigod,
She is a gift, my gift from God.
Perhaps there is a heavens dwell,
Perhaps there is a soul as well.
But not one seconds of her time
Would I give up, till death claims mine.  
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Sally S.
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1 posted 12-08-1999 12:34 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Awwwww!!  What I would give to be loved by someone so!  You are a true romantic!  (I won't tell  ) Beautiful, Sy.  
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2 posted 12-08-1999 01:06 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Perfection lies deep in his soul,
this muse from ages with gold,
he lives to love, then shares with all
the truths which before him fall.

Absolutely beautiful, Sy!  Thanks.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

suthern
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3 posted 12-08-1999 01:48 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Ah, Seymour... if someone ever wrote those last 2 lines about me, I'd melt. *S* This is beautiful!!
Mike
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4 posted 12-08-1999 01:57 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Nice. Enjoyed.
Severn
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5 posted 12-08-1999 02:23 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Ummm?
Nope - don't think so...

hehehe - j/k

Beautiful as per usual.

K
Iloveit
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6 posted 12-08-1999 02:30 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

whew, no kidding, gonna ditto suthern on that one, think I am gonna fall in love with a poet, I think I am due a good melting
  lol.....beautiful  
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 12-08-1999 04:28 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

La poesie, c'est exquise
Somehow the French makes it sound more exquisite than exquisite, which is what this is
Liz
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 12-08-1999 06:09 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sally,
You will be *L*
Sunshine,
I can only give my humble thanks.
Suthern,
Just to you,
That's the beginning
Not the end. *L*
Liz,
If there was a way to say what you said, you said it well. I bow to the Queen.
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 12-08-1999 08:41 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Truly, truly lovely thoughts.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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10 posted 12-08-1999 09:23 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Seymour, this is so lovely, it is such a testament to your love! Very well done!  

 Denise


hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 12-09-1999 06:28 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Such beautiful words of love Seymore
Elizabeth Santos
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12 posted 12-09-1999 08:19 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

So fortunate a soul is she
The subject of your poetry
Beautiful words
Liz
Betty Gravitt
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13 posted 12-09-1999 10:05 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

What I wouldn't give to believe,
that someone felt that way
about me.

Seymour this is by far my favorite...
Uhhh...... so far that is.  


 B Gravitt


Tara Simms
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14 posted 12-09-1999 10:17 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Absolutely breathtaking, Sy.

 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley


Nate Dogg
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15 posted 12-10-1999 12:36 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Good work, Sy.
I wished that I could write someting as beautiful as that.
Pepper
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16 posted 12-10-1999 01:28 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Sy.....this is such a beautiful tribute to your love.....swept me away..(sigh)


 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 12-10-1999 06:02 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Marge,
Truly, truly you make me blush. *L*
Denice,
Lovely and well done, I just placed you in my will. *L*
Hoot,
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. *L*
Liz,
But you are a subject as well
May perhaps in a different dwell. *L*
Betty,
So far is far enough for me. Thank you
Tara,
Absolutely Breathtaking, makes me blush. but it's nice to read. *L*
Nate,
Good work is all I ask, thank you.
Sweet Pepper,
Need I say more. *L*
Nan
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18 posted 12-10-1999 07:27 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Bringing this back one more time, Sy - cuz I love to see what a romantic you are....
Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 12-11-1999 04:00 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nan,
OK, there it is again. *L*
 
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