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I could have been there by now
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I could have been there by now |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
I could have been there by now If I hadn't put on my blinker instead of following the taillights ahead of me and I hadn't turned by habit to the call of my real world with little ones to hug, dogs to feed and supper to cook, another day to wake up and bills to pay, I could have driven straight to you and been wrapped up in your arms and your kisses your heart would be next to mine our breaths as one. if only I had stayed on the interstate... I could have been there by now ©1999 Iloveit |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I often have such thoughts... but you fear the leaving... I fear arriving to find a closed door. *S* Great poem, Lovey... now, hit the road!!!! LOL [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 12-08-1999).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh....curiosity peaked  Nice one, not you go girl and get there |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Now, that explains why you're late ... you didn't want to ask for directions !! ... Hmmm, but I thought this was a male trouble ... LOL and I ditto the lady from the gator country ... Hit the road Jack ! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Iloveit:..Take the dog with you, supper can take care of itself and as for the little ones...hmmmm...send them to me!!!... HUSG Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Iloveit, Coulda, woulda, shoulda, but you didn't. Well done. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I agree with everyone....time to follow your heart.... Lovely piece Iloveit.. A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
thanks all, suthern, we both need faith in ourselves, everything else will fall into place... hoot  didn't mean to peak your curiosity, lol, but thanksJTF, I am what they call directionally impaired, so poor fellow, I might never get there lolol RG lol, all good ideas *big smiles* thanks Seymore and Pepper thanks and thanks all, you guys mean so much to me....sigh...its one of those days when I need your smiles, and you guys always come through..... |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Thank you for this. It is an eye opener, to be sure. Sometimes we really DO need to listen to our inner self a bit more. Nice work. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
How wonderful life could be if we just followed our instincts and went for the gold..but, unfortunately, when there are obligations to be met and others to be considered, one cannot just turn one's back and ignore the consequences of the action. You did put on your blinker and that makes you much more admirable. Now, if the day ever comes that the blinker burns out and you can't put it on, well then, it must be an act of God!!!! To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
thanks sally and Mr. Balladeer, I thank you, love the way you look at things |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
iloveit... Beautiful, and I know where you are. Just want to echo Balladeer words. I'm still waiting for that blinker to burn out myself, and when it does I know it will be right. [This message has been edited by Betty Gravitt (edited 12-08-1999).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understood |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely ARCTIC WIND |
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