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Jingle Bells???

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Sally S.
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0 posted 12-07-1999 11:57 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sally S.

Dashing through the snow
In the family Chevrolet.
To the mall I go,
My credit card's at bay.

Cash machines will ring
As the clerk's all beg, invite.
Now I'm bound to cry and sing
That money song tonight...

Oh, Visa Gold, Visa Gold
How'm I gonna pay?
Oh what fun it is to spend
My monthy wage this way!
(Hey??!!)

Visa Gold, Visa Gold
How much?  I can't say.
My wallet's smokin' and I'm 'bout
To faint here dead away.
© Copyright 1999 Sally - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 12-08-1999 12:01 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sally -
That's so cute.
Thanks for lighting up my evening.


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Mike
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2 posted 12-08-1999 12:37 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

smiling here... (as he reaches to check that his wallet is still there)
First__Knight
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LOL.....How glad I am I don't have a GOLD CARD.  I liked this a lot  

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Severn
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4 posted 12-08-1999 05:25 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Jingle pockets more like.  
very nice - and all too true for many...!
Sally S.
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5 posted 12-08-1999 11:07 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Marge, happy to oblige.  

Mike, I'm glad this brought a smile. (hope your wallet's still intact)

Sir Knight, I wish I didn't...hehehe

Severn, Great name!      

Thank you all!    
Any other sugestions for a title for this jingle?

[This message has been edited by Sally S. (edited 12-08-1999).]
hoot_owl_rn
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ROFL...thank you Sally, sure needed that laugh today
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 12-08-1999 11:22 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sally,
Nice parody, enjoyed the read.
RainbowGirl
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8 posted 12-08-1999 11:24 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Sally: Cute..

HUGS

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ROFL... great one, Sally!
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LOL    

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11 posted 12-08-1999 03:58 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is really a sad song, Sally!I plan to be singing 5 or 6 stanzas of it before this season is over (with tears in my eyes as I hum!)

A real cutie!


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Sally S.
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Thank you all!!    

Balladeer, I'm ok..wouldn't call myself a cutie. *g*      Thanks again.




[This message has been edited by Sally S. (edited 12-08-1999).]
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This has got to be the funniest poem yet! Oh, my sides!!!    Fabulous!!

 Denise


 
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