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Remembering The One I Loved

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Lynn
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0 posted 12-07-1999 11:08 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lynn



Forgive me for asking, but
how did you lose your
everlasting glow.
You used to shine so
bright that you lit up
my life.

I'll always remember you
as the light of my life.
The person who made me
smle in the worst of times.
As the one who taught me
that love was true.

I'll always think of you
as a best friend.
A loving and tender
embrace on cold nights.
As an angel who guided me
through the pain and hate.

I'll always recall you
by your face and voice.
Your calming words spoken
to ease all of my worries.
By your cheerful expressions
upon your loving face.

I'll always remember you
as the one I once loved.


 If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~
© Copyright 1999 Jennifer Lynn Bonham - All Rights Reserved
Balladeer
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1 posted 12-07-1999 11:14 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Very melancholy, Lynn, and,as they say, you will do anything for one you once loved....except love them again.

 To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world.

Denise
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2 posted 12-07-1999 11:40 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sad, Lynn. Yet beautifully done. You are certainly a talented writer.

 Denise


Severn
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3 posted 12-08-1999 05:37 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Sad indeed.
Poignant fits it best I think.
Lovely writing, Lynn.
Lynn
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Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.


4 posted 12-08-1999 06:49 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn


Thank you all for the nice comments. Christmas is always the saddest holiday for me. Thanks again.


 If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~
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