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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Transfixed Transfixed in lights illusion Eyes on dreamy space, I watched the dust like amber snow, Descend upon her face. Her features fixed like marble, Stayed steady, still of goal. Emanating waves of heat, That seared my very soul. The cloak of night wrapped around And truth nowhere about. The fullness of my loss appeared And brought the madness out. My tears became an ocean, My sighs became a swarm, And raged and raged within me, Like lightening in a storm. And I was split of Adam force Split apart in two domain And not until they join once more Will I become whole again. So now at night, I tear and cry And sit in flights of senseless why? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I sit breathless at your transfixation... lovely, Sy, just lovely. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
The poet emerges from the tower And flaunts his eloquent verbal power And listens not to tower's toll But to the music in his soul Exquisite Liz |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
So glad to hear your poet's voice again Sy. And this is divine. Why's are never senseless, the are just hard to live through. Hugs. K |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Tones of sadness, I can relate. This is a wonderful expression, Seymour. Welcome back. Denise |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
A very sad poem. Have ask why so many times myself. A lot of times I never got an answer. Nicely done. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you so much. All I kept getting on the sight was please wait, they were fixing it. Waited three days and wrote to Ron. He said it was up. Well I'm back and can't say how much I missed you wonderful people. Sy Elizabeth, I think I missed you most of all. Etherial is as close as I can, Floats o'er my mind of thee. The colors of a rainbows span, A halo only I can see. Severn, Can't tell you how much I missed you. Thank you so much for the read and lovely comment. Denice, Glad to be back, thank you for the comments. Ohme, There may be answers, but I haven't found them yet. Thanks for the read. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
The flow of this is just perfect Seymore, oh, and the words are pretty goo too  |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, Sy, I don't think the words a goo like Hoot does. I think they're good! Nice to see you back! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
quote: Got the message - Thanks Sy....  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, I love you too. Your all goo. *L* Balladeer, Thanks for the look in. It's a goo feeling to know you read my stuff once in a while. Nan, You know your my secret. *L* |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Such heartfelt sadness. Now, I know you can not be this blue??? Honestly, I admire your work even more with each new piece. BTW...don't get lost anymore, k?? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sally, Just rub my lamp with one remark And I'll be back just like a spark. *L* |
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