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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 12-07-1999 05:44 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin


           Transfixed

Transfixed in lights illusion
Eyes on dreamy space,
I watched the dust like amber snow,
Descend upon her face.

Her features fixed like marble,
Stayed steady, still of goal.
Emanating waves of heat,
That seared my very soul.

The cloak of night wrapped around
And truth nowhere about.
The fullness of my loss appeared
And brought the madness out.

My tears became an ocean,
My sighs became a swarm,
And raged and raged within me,
Like lightening in a storm.

And I was split of Adam force
Split apart in two domain
And not until they join once more
Will I become whole again.

So now at night, I tear and cry
And sit in flights of senseless why?
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 12-07-1999 05:53 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I sit breathless at your transfixation...

lovely, Sy, just lovely.
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 12-07-1999 07:29 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

The poet emerges from the tower
And flaunts his eloquent verbal power
And listens not to tower's toll
But to the music in his soul
Exquisite
Liz
Severn
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3 posted 12-07-1999 08:19 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

So glad to hear your poet's voice again Sy.
And this is divine.

Why's are never senseless, the are just hard to live through.

Hugs. K
Denise
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4 posted 12-07-1999 08:38 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Tones of sadness, I can relate. This is a wonderful expression, Seymour. Welcome back.

 Denise


Ohme
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5 posted 12-07-1999 08:48 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

A very sad poem. Have ask why so many times myself. A lot of times I never got an answer.
Nicely done.
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 12-07-1999 09:32 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sunshine,
Thank you so much. All I kept getting on the sight was please wait, they were fixing it.
Waited three days and wrote to Ron. He said it was up. Well I'm back and can't say how much I missed you wonderful people. Sy
Elizabeth,
I think I missed you most of all.
Etherial is as close as I can,
Floats o'er my mind of thee.
The colors of a rainbows span,
A halo only I can see.
Severn,
Can't tell you how much I missed you.
Thank you so much for the read and lovely comment.
Denice,
Glad to be back, thank you for the comments.
Ohme,
There may be answers, but I haven't found them yet. Thanks for the read.
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 12-07-1999 09:45 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

The flow of this is just perfect Seymore, oh, and the words are pretty goo too  
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8 posted 12-07-1999 09:48 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, Sy, I don't think the words a goo like Hoot does. I think they're good! Nice to see you back!
Nan
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9 posted 12-07-1999 09:59 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

quote:
The shadings of my day.
The shadows of the things I know
And pass before my way.
Your presence walks besides me,
Invisible to the eye.
But as real as any carefree
My eye can see or spy.
So etherial is as close as I can,


Got the message - Thanks Sy....
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 12-07-1999 10:50 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Hoot,
I love you too.
Your all goo. *L*
Balladeer,
Thanks for the look in.
It's a goo feeling to know you read my stuff
once in a while.
Nan,
You know your my secret. *L*
Sally S.
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11 posted 12-07-1999 10:58 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Such heartfelt sadness.  Now, I know you can not be this blue???  
Honestly, I admire your work even more with each new piece.  
BTW...don't get lost anymore, k??
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 12-08-1999 12:17 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sally,
Just rub my lamp with one remark
And I'll be back just like a spark. *L*
 
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