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Sven
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Live in my words
      Let my words live in you. . .
Give me your mind and let me show it
      All the things it never knew.

Come with me on a voyage
      To places far and near. . .
Give me your soul and let me share with it
      All the things that I hold dear.

Fly with me, fly and be free
      Here's the way to start. . .
Give me your mind and give me your soul
      And let me give you. . .
                             . . . my heart


 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


© Copyright 1999 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-07-1999 04:24 PM       View Profile for jbouder   Email jbouder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jbouder

Very nice work, Sven.  Especially the first stanza.  Very nice.
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2 posted 12-07-1999 05:19 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

To have someone take an offered heart... let me know what that feels like, okay? *S* Well done!
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Wow, Sven - this is every poet's dream I think. Well worded.
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Sven
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Thank you all. . .

suthern, I'll let you know. . . hopefully my offer will be accepted. . .



 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Very beautiful words
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Sven my friend, another poem that's so beautiful.  Beauty from a beautiful soul I believe  


 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
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Beautiful words!  

 Denise


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8 posted 12-09-1999 10:29 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

Beautiful. It would be hard to refuse a heart filled with words like this.

 B Gravitt


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