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Fall In Love Lovers

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 12-07-1999 10:38 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

When will I meet my fall in love woman,
and when we meet will she know I'm her man.

What if I met you and I was ready to explore my feelings,
could I presume you were also interested and willing.

How could I reveal to her who I am to meet her satisfaction,
and if I did I hope the results would be a good reaction.

I can honestly say I am attracted to at least one woman each day,
but when I try to talk to them they just ignore me and walk away.

And I know that initiating a relationship means I need to take some action,
but falling in Love, oh my goodness, it works best with a mutual attraction.

There are lots of people out there looking for a relationship that's real,
yet, they're only willing to step forward when they meet their ideal.

That would be the special person that has always been there somewhere in our mind,
the one we've hoped and dreamed and maybe prayed for time after time.

And why am I thinking about Love right away,
It's always best to start out as friends anyway.

Take some time to look and talk before you touch and feel,
as you explore each others personality to see what common interests are revealed.

And if the chemistry is there you'll both soon discover,
that you are a brand new pair of fall in love lovers.

@1999 James


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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 12-07-1999 10:09 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Awe wow...am I glad I read this !!  There is so much truth in this piece!  It certainly deserves to go back up to the top!  You said it all - when you said, "take some time to look and talk, before you touch and feel..."
I do believe that's where most relationships go wrong nowadays....people get in too big of a hurry to jump in feet first, they forget to try and "know" the person before sharing intimacy....What good is one without the other, really?  Fabulous piece you have here, I hope others take time to read the truth in your words!!  Thank you for sharing!!  And I see you're fairly new, so a big Welcome to you!!

 - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF

Rachel_A
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2 posted 12-07-1999 10:37 PM       View Profile for Rachel_A   Email Rachel_A   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rachel_A

i love it when a guy actually feels the same way i do about this type of thing...and you know, your someone is out there  
Sally S.
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3 posted 12-07-1999 10:45 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

How nice!  I do love the way you think.  Now, we need a few hundred thousand others to read this and take notes.  
WhtDove
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4 posted 12-07-1999 10:51 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I'm in agreement as well! True words they are!  And a big Welcome from me too!

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Jesus is the reason for the season

JamesMichael
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5 posted 12-08-1999 08:04 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you FemmeFatale, Rachel, Sally, and WhtDove.  It is really a blessing to have someone understand and appreciate a poem that I have written from my heart.  James
paperguardian
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6 posted 12-08-1999 08:40 PM       View Profile for paperguardian   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for paperguardian

This one really touched me, your expression of defining love is powerful and fresh. More people need to think like you  .  Wonderful poem!!!!
Saxoness
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7 posted 12-08-1999 08:48 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

Beautiful!

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

JamesMichael
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8 posted 12-10-1999 04:50 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you paperguardian and saxoness for reading my poem and for the nice comments.  And thanks for the beautiful red rose saxoness.  Paperguardian when I read you name it reminded me of my old friend Hector in Calif.  He loved to give his friends nicknames and we mutually knew a girl named Gayla...so they had these paper products called Gayla..and so he gave her the nickname "Gayla paper towel".  Another friend was Cappy and he nicknamed her "cap pistol".   I used to get a kick out of some of the names he would come up with.  Just some fun in my past.   James
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9 posted 12-11-1999 09:12 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

I'm glad I read this one!  It's very true.  Thanks for reminding me that there are good men out there!
Denise
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10 posted 12-11-1999 09:39 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is lovely, James. I enjoyed it!

 Denise


JamesMichael
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11 posted 12-13-1999 03:28 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you tulip and denise for reading and commenting about my poem.  Tulip I thank you for your nice impression of me.  This poem was written out of my frustration to find a mutual attraction.   Usually I like a woman and she isn't that attracted to me and sometimes a woman likes me but I'm not attracted to her.     James  
Elizabeth Santos
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12 posted 12-13-1999 03:35 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

One way she will know you is through your poetry, It is revealing.Love happens, though when you least expect it.
Liz
Echo Rhayne
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13 posted 12-13-1999 09:33 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

James, so much truth, so much emotion, so great! Thank you for sharing with us!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


JamesMichael
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14 posted 01-10-2000 04:11 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Liz and Echo for your nice comments.  Liz, I guess love is going to be happening real soon because I have about given up and although I do have some hope I don't expect it to happen.  Every girl I'm crazy about only desires or is available for friendship.  I think this friendship thing is a growing experience for me, and I'll admit I was never good at that..so probably this is a wonderful time for me to improve.   Echo you sure know how to make a guy feel good.  I wrote this after I began to reflect on what type of woman fit my definition of ideal and realizing that it is so hard to find a mutual attraction.   James
 
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