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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-12-07 08:19 AM


Cotton Candy Clouds
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

White and puffy.
Light and carefree.
Cotton candy clouds,
as far as I can see.

The skies of December,
background of blue,
with softest clouds scattered
in the greatest of hues.

Gold at mornings breaking,
White at mid-morn.
Grey when skies are threatening
the coming of the storm.

Softest pink at the end of the day.
Cotton candy clouds
so delicious to see.
Cotton candy clouds waiting
for you and for me.

Turned to lavender,
magenta and amber
when touched by the evening sun ...
cotton candy clouds ...
your day is now done.





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Pepper
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1 posted 1999-12-07 08:47 AM


Another beautiful picture you paint for us Marge....
Just lovely.....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!



hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 1999-12-07 10:05 AM


Excellent imagery, I have to second Peppers comments on this one  
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 1999-12-07 08:28 PM


Pepper and Hoot -

Thanks gals.  And tonight they were exquisite as they turned in for the night.


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Denise
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4 posted 1999-12-07 08:54 PM


Very beautiful, Marge! And I've never seen a sky more beautiful than a Florida sky!  

 Denise



Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 1999-12-07 09:11 PM


Marge,
Delicious, enjoyed the read.

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