How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #4 Archive
 The Storm
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

The Storm

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
First__Knight
Senior Member
since 11-08-1999
Posts 688


0 posted 12-07-1999 02:01 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for First__Knight



The storm
~First Knight~

Like the fire in the sky, so burns my love for you.
Deep within my heart, my feelings turning blue.
The flash of light, the pouring rain, the wind blowing hard.
I have lost your love for me I see, among the mighty storm.

Searching now in the darkness,
That you brought with you,
Grabbing for any moment shared,
Will you give one or two?

As the night takes over what once was light, I can see you fading away.
Taking my dreams, thoughts and spirit, and watching them all decay.

My life goes on,
Now the storm is gone,
Left only with growing pains.

Life renewed,
From your storm that brewed,
And only the water remains.



 Share what you are for you are what you share

© Copyright 1999 First__Knight - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 09-03-99
Posts 5497
Forever In Your Heart


1 posted 12-07-1999 02:20 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

I liked this one too!  
First__Knight
Senior Member
since 11-08-1999
Posts 688


2 posted 12-07-1999 08:49 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Thank you Romantic Heart  
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


3 posted 12-07-1999 09:42 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

The final two lines....wow, they sum it up perfectly.
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 07-07-99
Posts 32119
Tamarac Fla


4 posted 12-07-1999 09:47 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

First,
Enjoyed the read.
Eloise
Senior Member
since 11-27-1999
Posts 1115
Wyoming


5 posted 12-07-1999 09:49 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

This is excellent First Knight.  I enjoyed it very much.
First__Knight
Senior Member
since 11-08-1999
Posts 688


6 posted 12-07-1999 10:44 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

How wonderful each of you are because coments from you with such talent brings a smile to me  

 Share what you are for you are what you share

Sally S.
Senior Member
since 06-07-99
Posts 887
Ohio


7 posted 12-07-1999 10:52 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

This poem could be a song!  Was that intended?  Very nice, Sir Knight.  
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 06-05-99
Posts 26302
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA


8 posted 12-07-1999 10:54 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I agree with Sally. It has a very lyrical quality. Nicely written, Knight.

 To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world.

First__Knight
Senior Member
since 11-08-1999
Posts 688


9 posted 12-07-1999 11:42 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

It was not Sally....but I will sing it to you ..LOL  I am at your service    
Thank you Balladeer



[This message has been edited by First__Knight (edited 12-07-1999).]
Sven
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 11-23-1999
Posts 15611
Lansing, MI USA


10 posted 12-08-1999 08:21 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Excellent work my friend!

Welcome to the group!

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Betty Gravitt
Member
since 09-11-99
Posts 225
Georgia United States


11 posted 12-08-1999 09:57 AM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

I liked this. A wonderful ending. Those last two lines say it all.  
Pepper
Member Elite
since 08-19-99
Posts 3134
Southern Florida

Official Passions Reader
12 posted 12-08-1999 11:26 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

You touched me .....Wonderful piece First Knight....
btw...like your signature  

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


First__Knight
Senior Member
since 11-08-1999
Posts 688


13 posted 12-11-1999 09:58 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Thank you so much for your words Betty and Pepper.  It goes a long way to my heart  
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 08-22-99
Posts 23002


14 posted 12-11-1999 10:01 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

You are quite a gifted writer. I enjoyed this one too!

 Denise


 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #4 >> The Storm Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors