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Christmas Wish

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Sally S.
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0 posted 12-07-1999 01:12 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sally S.

This was written as a song, so you'll have to keep that in mind as the meter is not fully intact as a poem might be.  


Christmas Wish

Santa won't you bring this wish for me?
Promise I won't ask for two.
I've decorated my Christmas tree
And now I'm counting on you...

Anticipated all this year
That my wish would be heard.
Told all my friends, "I'm sure he'll hear!"
They say that I am absurd...

Well, why's it hard for them to see?
I want my wish to come true.
And if you missed what my wish could be...
It's to spend Christmas with you.  

I wanna ride in the great big sleigh of red
As we journey to each house.
See all the children dreaming in their beds...
(I'll be as quiet as a mouse!!)
shhhhhh!!!!


I wanna see all the joy you bring
To all the girls and the boys.
I wanna hear all the laughter ring
As they open up the toys.

Just the feeling that your kindness deems
To all of those who'll believe,
That the joy of Christmas really means
The gifts you give, not receive.

Say Santa, can't you grant this wish for me?
It's the only one that'll do.
Got milk and cookies by the Christmas tree
And now I'm counting...Santa on you.

© Copyright 1999 Sally - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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1 posted 12-07-1999 08:01 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Sally: That's a perfect wish to me as well..

HUGS

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...


Pepper
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2 posted 12-07-1999 09:00 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Lovely wish...lovely song...lovely poem......!!!

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


hoot_owl_rn
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What a wonderful wish  
Sally S.
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4 posted 12-07-1999 12:17 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Thank you, Rainbow, pepper and hoot!  Glad you liked my silly lil' song.     Happy Holidays to ya!  
Balladeer
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5 posted 12-07-1999 03:39 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is great, Sally. That's a neat idea to be with Santa while he delivered presents to everyone! Did you name the song, "Sleigh me, Santa"? LOL!
Denise
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6 posted 12-07-1999 08:34 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wow! Wouldn't it be great if this were the next BIG Christmas song!! I can just hear it now! (and we can all say we knew you way back when!)  This is great Sally! I love it!  

 Denise


Sally S.
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7 posted 12-08-1999 12:22 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

M&M     You "sleigh" me..you really do!

Denise, Hey, you never know?! I could be the next "Weird Sal".  

Thank you for the read and comments.
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