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Christmas Wish |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio 
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This was written as a song, so you'll have to keep that in mind as the meter is not fully intact as a poem might be.  Christmas Wish Santa won't you bring this wish for me? Promise I won't ask for two. I've decorated my Christmas tree And now I'm counting on you... Anticipated all this year That my wish would be heard. Told all my friends, "I'm sure he'll hear!" They say that I am absurd... Well, why's it hard for them to see? I want my wish to come true. And if you missed what my wish could be... It's to spend Christmas with you. I wanna ride in the great big sleigh of red As we journey to each house. See all the children dreaming in their beds... (I'll be as quiet as a mouse!!) shhhhhh!!!! I wanna see all the joy you bring To all the girls and the boys. I wanna hear all the laughter ring As they open up the toys. Just the feeling that your kindness deems To all of those who'll believe, That the joy of Christmas really means The gifts you give, not receive. Say Santa, can't you grant this wish for me? It's the only one that'll do. Got milk and cookies by the Christmas tree And now I'm counting...Santa on you. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Sally: That's a perfect wish to me as well.. HUGS Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Lovely wish...lovely song...lovely poem......!!! A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a wonderful wish |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Thank you, Rainbow, pepper and hoot! Glad you liked my silly lil' song. Happy Holidays to ya! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is great, Sally. That's a neat idea to be with Santa while he delivered presents to everyone! Did you name the song, "Sleigh me, Santa"? LOL!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! Wouldn't it be great if this were the next BIG Christmas song!! I can just hear it now! (and we can all say we knew you way back when!) This is great Sally! I love it! Denise |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
M&M  You "sleigh" me..you really do!Denise, Hey, you never know?! I could be the next "Weird Sal".  Thank you for the read and comments. |
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