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If i was gone tomorrow

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Kevin
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0 posted 12-07-1999 12:00 AM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

If I was gone tomorrow
Would you really know?
Would you feel the slightest sorrow
Would it really show?

how soon would it take to fade
your thoughts, my memory
When my final hand is played
how long will you remember me

a day, a week, a month, a  year
It matters not you know
For maybe you would shed a tear
still after time, those too, must go.
© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-07-1999 12:03 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is wonderful, Kevin! The clock icon goes well with it too!  

 Denise


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2 posted 12-07-1999 12:24 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

You ain't going nowhere, boy.
Cause we love you,
yes we do.

And if you left,

I said if you left ...

I'D CRY A RIVER OVER YOU !


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kevin
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3 posted 12-07-1999 12:26 AM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

*takes the martini away from marge*

your startin to repeat yourself hehe

[This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 12-07-1999).]
Eloise
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4 posted 12-07-1999 12:27 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Nice piece Kevin.  Thought provoking.
poetFemmeFatale
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5 posted 12-07-1999 10:03 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Oh wow, I really liked this...really got me thinking...As obviously you were!!  What a powerful lot you had to say in just 3 stanzas!  Bravo!   I admire one who can say so much in so few words....  

 - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF

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6 posted 12-08-1999 05:50 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

All things pass and it is horrid to think we might be forgotten.
Great writing!
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Kevin, there would be rivers of tears my friend
Pepper
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8 posted 12-08-1999 10:32 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Read this twice and it got me thinking....
Great piece Kevin...

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


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9 posted 12-08-1999 10:36 AM       View Profile for paperguardian   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for paperguardian

  Wow!  In a few words you have managed to express the greatest fear we have - of being forgotten.  Touched me very personally.
 
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