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Shooting Star

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Tara Simms
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0 posted 12-06-1999 10:45 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms


Shooting Star

Still night
Moon glowing bright and full.
Streak of iridescence.
Fervent wish to the gods.
Little did I know
she was wishing on the same star
for the same thing.
You.



 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley


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1 posted 12-06-1999 11:20 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Hey, Tara, this is definitely the way to get a good message in a few words. Others CAN be wishing for the same thing we are. Someone gets disappointed.
Denise
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2 posted 12-06-1999 11:35 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is a beautiful poem, Tara! So much truth!  

 Denise


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3 posted 12-07-1999 12:39 AM       View Profile for startin_fresh   Email startin_fresh   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for startin_fresh

Tara:

You seem to be on your way to having all your wishes come true. My wish is that they do come true for you.


 Courage is the price that life exacts
for granting peace with yourself.
--Amelia Earhart


Sally S.
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4 posted 12-07-1999 01:39 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

  
Well put...and sadly true.  It is so difficult when you're falling in love.
All the best to you.  
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So few words...so much said  
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Speaks volumes....
Like this much Tara!

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


Tara Simms
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7 posted 12-07-1999 02:50 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Thanks for reading!  But I think I'm on a roll, so MY wish is going to come true!  

 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley


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8 posted 12-07-1999 05:06 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I wish for your wish to come true and if it doesn't that there will be another wish that will.
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