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Not without a cost

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Kevin
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0 posted 12-06-1999 08:34 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin


I awoke this morning
with hopes to start anew.
But as I sat up hesitant
I only thought of you.

I went on through the day
I played this stupid game.
Softly crying to myself
‘cause things were still the same.

Day to day, I will live on
But not without a cost
every breath that fills my soul
reminds me what I’ve lost.


 The two most waisted things in life are time and potential, I have both and not a clue what to do with them.
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caroline
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1 posted 12-06-1999 08:39 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Very sad, Kev...I can relate, though. Hope you wake up tomorrow with a lighter heart  
Well written poem, this is.


 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


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2 posted 12-06-1999 09:09 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Happens to us all, Kevin. We learn from our losses, fortunately. Good poem.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 12-06-1999 09:40 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

So sad, I second Balladeer on this one.
WhtDove
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4 posted 12-07-1999 11:57 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Aw, Kevin!    I hope things get better for ya soon!

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Jesus is the reason for the season

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5 posted 12-07-1999 12:21 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Someone who feels as deeply as you, will not be feeling this particular way for long.
Touching words, Kevin.  
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Well said, Kevin, insightful and well crafted. You are a talented young man  
 
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