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Not without a cost
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Not without a cost |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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I awoke this morning with hopes to start anew. But as I sat up hesitant I only thought of you. I went on through the day I played this stupid game. Softly crying to myself ‘cause things were still the same. Day to day, I will live on But not without a cost every breath that fills my soul reminds me what I’ve lost. The two most waisted things in life are time and potential, I have both and not a clue what to do with them. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Very sad, Kev...I can relate, though. Hope you wake up tomorrow with a lighter heart  Well written poem, this is. It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Happens to us all, Kevin. We learn from our losses, fortunately. Good poem. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
So sad, I second Balladeer on this one. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Aw, Kevin!  I hope things get better for ya soon!<*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Someone who feels as deeply as you, will not be feeling this particular way for long. Touching words, Kevin. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Well said, Kevin, insightful and well crafted. You are a talented young man |
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