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I'll Never Stop Loving You

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amber
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0 posted 12-06-1999 06:34 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

happy anniversary baby!

"I'll Never Stop Loving You"

It's been so long since the first kiss,
But I can still feel it on my skin,
I was blinded by your smile, your eyes,
To realize, I loved you even then.

I still remember the first touch,
It lingered forever in my mind,
That's when I knew that in my life,
You were the one I was ment to find.

It's been awhile since the first night,
When you made love to me,
My heart was yours, my dreams with you,
And my soul was set free.

Its been awhile since the question,
Can we really make this work,
I love you more now than ever,
And I know our love has found its worth.

I remember looking in to your eyes,
The first time you said "I love you,"
It melted my heart, my worries fled,
Because I knew that it was true.

It's been so long since the first feeling,
That told me I couldn't live without you,
And even though it wasnt easy,
We were ment to be, somehow I knew.

Today I want to tell you,
With times to reminisce,
I'll never stop loving you,
Our love would be to much to miss.





[This message has been edited by amber (edited 12-07-1999).]
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1 posted 12-06-1999 07:55 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Amber, this is very good. May I make a suggestion? See the icon that says ECard? You can send this poem via e-mail to anyone you like. It's a good 'love' poem and others may want to do the same thing (we get lots of visitors/readers here). May I suggest you check your spelling and capitalization? If you need help or have questions, please let me know either by e-mail or via ICQ. Thanks!  
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2 posted 12-06-1999 07:56 PM       View Profile for JENNIFER_24   Email JENNIFER_24   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JENNIFER_24

Beautiful!  
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