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0 posted 12-06-1999 06:09 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber


when i see you today,
will i be more than your friend,
or will i endure,
the same old games agian?

if i was to hold you,
so tight and so long,
and tell you i love you,
would it be wrong?

becuase we are only "friends."

when i see you today,
will your promise be kept?
will they know who i am to you,
and have to accept?

if i was to kiss you,
so soft and so sweet,
would it be alright,
for you to tell me you love me?

or do "friends" never get that close?

when i see you today,
will my worries be gone,
my questions answered,
our love somehow strong?

if i was to have you,
till death do us part,
through sickness and health,
with all of my heart,

then will i never have to prtend to be
          your "friend?"


 i often chose to follow my heart, only to lose my way.

© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 12-06-1999 06:13 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very sweet.
Dusk Treader
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2 posted 12-06-1999 09:18 PM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

Lovely poem, much enjoyed.  Thanks for posting  

 "Human pride sings a vengeful song, inspired by the times you've been walked on" - Creed - "What If"

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3 posted 12-06-1999 10:54 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, Amber. I hope your dreams come true.

 Denise


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4 posted 12-06-1999 11:02 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This poem is deeper than it appears on the surface. Very good questions, Amber.
amber
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5 posted 12-07-1999 02:26 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

thank you all for your replies, and yes balladeer it is much deeper than it appears, surley a man like you could understand that! i rememeber you were one of the first to welcome me here and make me feel at home when i first came here. oh by the way i fixed that problem i e-mailed you about, actually it fixed itself. thanks agian for reading.
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Enjoyed this piece Amber....
I am married going on 16 years to my best friend....for me it worked beautifully....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


hoot_owl_rn
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Very sweet
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