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I smile as you're both turned on... *g*

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 12-06-1999 05:08 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

You're driving me completely NUTS
I'm almost there and then we stop
I sigh and I tug each strand of hair
patience gone I slide you back on top

but you're no better either
this feeling cannot be conveyed
all I want is heaven
and the chance for us to play

A last the wait is over
my expectations are being met
smiling as you're both turned on
no longer need I fret

To know again the magic of PIP
but which one do I choose
laptop or pc?
either cause I can't really LOSE..

What a day...*G*



 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...


© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Innocent_Bystander
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1 posted 12-06-1999 05:13 PM       View Profile for Innocent_Bystander   Email Innocent_Bystander   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Innocent_Bystander

LMAO,
Wonderful Poem even tho at the start it sounded like adult post.......but my minds always in the gutter, hehe...see ya's later

 Any man can make a baby, But only a real man can take care of his children. ~Unknown~
Pepper
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2 posted 12-06-1999 05:35 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Wow....Great to SEE you Rainbow....you live up to your' name....you're gorgeous!!
Like the poem too.....'S'....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


Martie
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3 posted 12-06-1999 06:03 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Too funny, too much.  Thanks for the laugh.  You didn't fool me a bit.
Lost Dreamer
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4 posted 12-06-1999 06:09 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

         Really enjoyed, had me wondering at first too.
Severn
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5 posted 12-06-1999 06:09 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

hehehe - ah, the choices in life!
LOL!
Balladeer
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6 posted 12-06-1999 07:36 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Ah, Rainbow!!! Nobody can manipulate a browser like you!
Poet deVine
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7 posted 12-06-1999 07:40 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I knew what it was right away! Good one, dear!  
WhtDove
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8 posted 12-06-1999 08:09 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

RG...I admit too, I thought this was adult. Oh my...I loved it, great piece!
Nan
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9 posted 12-06-1999 08:45 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Very cute RG.... You had to have a good twist in the end... Had to....
caroline
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10 posted 12-06-1999 08:54 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

ROTFLMAO!!!  Oh this is SOOOOO funny...I love it!

And I agree with Pepper!  You ARE a rainbow!
Beautiful photo of you...


 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


cjs9853
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11 posted 12-06-1999 08:59 PM       View Profile for cjs9853   Email cjs9853   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for cjs9853

really enjoyed it,a good one you are beautiful )
Beri
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12 posted 12-06-1999 09:01 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Hmmm, I too took this first as belonging in adult...heehee...but I love it!  Great poem!  
RainbowGirl
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13 posted 12-06-1999 09:49 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Innocent_Bystander: Well get it out of the gutter, I'm a lady you know..*G*

HUGS

Pepper: Go and put your glasses on sweetheart...thanks..

HUSG

Martie: Shucks...*G*

HUGS

Lost Dreamer: You mean I nearly got you?.*g*

HUGS

Severn: Yep, and it was a tough one...LOL

HUGS

Bal: I treat all my readers gently...*g*

HUSG

PdV: Course you did, there were no sparkles or dangly bits...ROFLMAO..!!

HUSG

WhtDove: Wouldn't it have been a "great piece!"...ooops...Rainbow!!!

HUGS

Nan: In my hands, no twist, just gliding over the ...keys...*g*

HUSG

Caroline: Glad to see you laughing...   

HUGS

CJS: You're just biased... But I'm glad you are..

HUGS

Beri:  Thanks ....I have a wicked mind and like to let it play occasionally...*g*

HUGS





 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...


JTF
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14 posted 12-07-1999 08:54 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

ROFLMAO ... Good one Rainbow ...  

Cute pic ! ..  


 Plaisir d'amour ne dure qu'un moment,
Chagrin d'amour dure toute la vie.
hoot_owl_rn
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15 posted 12-07-1999 08:56 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

LOL...good one  
Iloveit
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16 posted 12-07-1999 09:10 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

good one rainbow, thanks for the smile ...loved the pic too, have been debating on posting mine, but ......I don't know lol, we'll see
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