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RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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0 posted 1999-12-06 05:08 PM


You're driving me completely NUTS
I'm almost there and then we stop
I sigh and I tug each strand of hair
patience gone I slide you back on top

but you're no better either
this feeling cannot be conveyed
all I want is heaven
and the chance for us to play

A last the wait is over
my expectations are being met
smiling as you're both turned on
no longer need I fret

To know again the magic of PIP
but which one do I choose
laptop or pc?
either cause I can't really LOSE..

What a day...*G*



 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...



© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Innocent_Bystander
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since 1999-12-05
Posts 15

1 posted 1999-12-06 05:13 PM


LMAO,
Wonderful Poem even tho at the start it sounded like adult post.......but my minds always in the gutter, hehe...see ya's later

 Any man can make a baby, But only a real man can take care of his children. ~Unknown~

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
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2 posted 1999-12-06 05:35 PM


Wow....Great to SEE you Rainbow....you live up to your' name....you're gorgeous!!
Like the poem too.....'S'....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!



Martie
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3 posted 1999-12-06 06:03 PM


Too funny, too much.  Thanks for the laugh.  You didn't fool me a bit.
Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
4 posted 1999-12-06 06:09 PM


         Really enjoyed, had me wondering at first too.
Severn
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5 posted 1999-12-06 06:09 PM


hehehe - ah, the choices in life!
LOL!

Balladeer
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6 posted 1999-12-06 07:36 PM


Ah, Rainbow!!! Nobody can manipulate a browser like you!
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
7 posted 1999-12-06 07:40 PM


I knew what it was right away! Good one, dear!  

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
8 posted 1999-12-06 08:09 PM


RG...I admit too, I thought this was adult. Oh my...I loved it, great piece!
Nan
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9 posted 1999-12-06 08:45 PM


Very cute RG.... You had to have a good twist in the end... Had to....
caroline
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10 posted 1999-12-06 08:54 PM


ROTFLMAO!!!  Oh this is SOOOOO funny...I love it!

And I agree with Pepper!  You ARE a rainbow!
Beautiful photo of you...


 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain



cjs9853
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since 1999-11-26
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smyrna, tn usa.
11 posted 1999-12-06 08:59 PM


really enjoyed it,a good one you are beautiful )
Beri
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12 posted 1999-12-06 09:01 PM


Hmmm, I too took this first as belonging in adult...heehee...but I love it!  Great poem!  
RainbowGirl
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13 posted 1999-12-06 09:49 PM


Innocent_Bystander: Well get it out of the gutter, I'm a lady you know..*G*

HUGS

Pepper: Go and put your glasses on sweetheart...thanks..

HUSG

Martie: Shucks...*G*

HUGS

Lost Dreamer: You mean I nearly got you?.*g*

HUGS

Severn: Yep, and it was a tough one...LOL

HUGS

Bal: I treat all my readers gently...*g*

HUSG

PdV: Course you did, there were no sparkles or dangly bits...ROFLMAO..!!

HUSG

WhtDove: Wouldn't it have been a "great piece!"...ooops...Rainbow!!!

HUGS

Nan: In my hands, no twist, just gliding over the ...keys...*g*

HUSG

Caroline: Glad to see you laughing...   

HUGS

CJS: You're just biased... But I'm glad you are..

HUGS

Beri:  Thanks ....I have a wicked mind and like to let it play occasionally...*g*

HUGS





 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...



JTF
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since 1999-08-09
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France
14 posted 1999-12-07 08:54 AM


ROFLMAO ... Good one Rainbow ...  

Cute pic ! ..  


 Plaisir d'amour ne dure qu'un moment,
Chagrin d'amour dure toute la vie.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
15 posted 1999-12-07 08:56 AM


LOL...good one  
Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
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NM
16 posted 1999-12-07 09:10 AM


good one rainbow, thanks for the smile ...loved the pic too, have been debating on posting mine, but ......I don't know lol, we'll see
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