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Love of Language (maybe repost)

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Seaangel
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since 07-27-99
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Auckland, New Zealand


0 posted 12-06-1999 04:04 PM       View Profile for Seaangel   Email Seaangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seaangel

how could I say
there was
anything of flow & form
I knew so much? Your
impenetrable sulkiness I
have felt
this dawn & more.
you know it I
             owe
         it all to you &
the lightbulb
would not
blink
     without you

& how I love you so
  much I
        have
taken you at pen-point
under it you

take shape from my dreams
& chestache seems
peculiarly folded
against you

the brittle night
snapped shadow & light
warm music blurs
under the influence.

I am drunk with you.
© Copyright 1999 Angela King - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 12-06-1999 05:20 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Sea has just this minute said as she stands over my shoulder 'I'm not completely happy with this...'
WELL!
I am!
I love this, I love your style.

And since I know you like them

                
Denise
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2 posted 12-06-1999 09:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I love this too!
:


 Denise


Seaangel
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3 posted 12-06-1999 11:25 PM       View Profile for Seaangel   Email Seaangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seaangel

thanks, Severn, D, I only wanted to change the last 2 lines because I thought it was a little cliched, but you have set my heart at rest.

And thank you for the rolling smilies, aren't they so cool?!?!?





(And I promise to restrict myself to only one per message after this, but I had to go all out just once!)
 
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