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All "I" am.

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ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 09-23-1999
Posts 739
Wisconsin


0 posted 12-06-1999 11:44 AM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Of all the things that we've been through
of all the things that we have done
the "real" me and "real" you
is where it truly all begun

I never knew until I tried
I've done my "thing" I wanted to
to know the you that has'nt "died"
to know the you "you" are inside

I've met this person finally
'took all I had and more sometimes
I'm glad I finally got to see
and this is now what really shines

Whatever happens, I want you to know
I'll never be sorry for trying my best
I'll freely tell and freely show
I've put us both right to the test

But we did it together, every step of the way
"hand in hand" is the path we traveled
I'll never regret one single day
all the "secrets" I have unravelled

I told you then, I'll tell you now
I'll always be here for you
I'm still walking with you right now
I never once was a bit "untrue"

Dont be mad, or scared to show
what's inside your heart
all that you should always know
I've told you from the start

I'll never know unless I try
to see if "it" is there
I'll try untill the day I die
myself I'll always share

With you or whoever may come my way
I'll never be mad or sore
but I'll try untill my dying day
always looking for more

I'm the hardest type to "deal with"
I realize that and tell it straight
not everyone's "fit" to "handle" it
all the "feelings" that I can make

I'll never hold back in showing "me"
so always know its "me" you know
my feelings for people are free to see
and I'm proud that I can freely show

I'll never regret or feel bad about this
about you or "us" or all "our" times
I learn from all, and that I "kiss"
and that's a fact that always "shines".



 Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.
© Copyright 1999 B.J.Howe - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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since 11-08-1999
Posts 9405
Pennsylvania


1 posted 12-06-1999 12:11 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

A very open and loving relationship, I would say. And well expressed
Liz
ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 09-23-1999
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Wisconsin


2 posted 12-06-1999 05:38 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Liz... Thank You for your comment, you are right about that.  I do everything can to keep it that way  

 Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.
 
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