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broker6
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 132
Bellevue, NE, Sarpy

0 posted 1999-12-06 09:45 AM


I Shall Weep When You Go
by © Richard J. Budig 1995


I shall weep when you go
My heart will break without you
I cannot think of life without you
I cannot understand this parting
All I really want is you

I shall weep when you go
My life will be empty without you
I will be hollow without you
I cannot understand this parting
All I really want is you

I shall weep when you go
My dreams will fade without you
I will molder to dust without you
I cannot understand this parting
All I really want is you

I shall weep when you go
My hopes will end without you
I will falter and fail without you
I cannot understand this parting
All I really want is you

I shall weep . . .

                    I shall weep . . .

I shall weep when you go


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Rachel_A
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since 1999-11-30
Posts 70
North Webster, IN USA
1 posted 1999-12-06 11:01 AM


the pain will fade....'tis better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all'.....
Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
2 posted 1999-12-06 12:14 PM


Very nice poem, but so heartbreaking.
I enjoyed reading it
Liz

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-12-06 10:03 PM


Very heartbreaking and beautifully done. I enjoyed reading this.

 Denise



caroline
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since 1999-08-16
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4 posted 1999-12-06 10:14 PM


ohhhh this is very very sad, and very very beautiful.  

I will print this one...it speaks volumes to me, Richard.

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


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