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I Shall Weep When You Go

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broker6
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0 posted 12-06-1999 09:45 AM       View Profile for broker6   Email broker6   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for broker6

I Shall Weep When You Go
by Richard J. Budig 1995


I shall weep when you go
My heart will break without you
I cannot think of life without you
I cannot understand this parting
All I really want is you

I shall weep when you go
My life will be empty without you
I will be hollow without you
I cannot understand this parting
All I really want is you

I shall weep when you go
My dreams will fade without you
I will molder to dust without you
I cannot understand this parting
All I really want is you

I shall weep when you go
My hopes will end without you
I will falter and fail without you
I cannot understand this parting
All I really want is you

I shall weep . . .

                    I shall weep . . .

I shall weep when you go

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Rachel_A
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1 posted 12-06-1999 11:01 AM       View Profile for Rachel_A   Email Rachel_A   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rachel_A

the pain will fade....'tis better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all'.....
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 12-06-1999 12:14 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Very nice poem, but so heartbreaking.
I enjoyed reading it
Liz
Denise
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3 posted 12-06-1999 10:03 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very heartbreaking and beautifully done. I enjoyed reading this.

 Denise


caroline
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4 posted 12-06-1999 10:14 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

ohhhh this is very very sad, and very very beautiful.  

I will print this one...it speaks volumes to me, Richard.

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

 
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