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First__Knight
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0 posted 1999-12-06 03:08 AM


I would.....
~First Knight~


I would be there, if given a choice.
I would be there, just to rejoice.

I would hold you close,  as the day to night.
I would kiss you gentle,  as a white dove might.

I would cherish you always,  without a doubt.
I would give you happiness,  and not hold out.

I would sing of your beauty,  to the heaven above.
I would talk of your heart,  so filled with love.

I would hold you in my eyes,  just give me a chance.
I would not break your heart,  just give me this dance.






[This message has been edited by First__Knight (edited 12-06-1999).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 1999-12-06 06:30 AM


First_Knight -
How pretty this is.  
Sounds like someone is lucky indeed.



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First__Knight
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2 posted 1999-12-06 06:49 AM


Thank you Marge.....Coming from you that means a lot to me  
Severn
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3 posted 1999-12-06 07:11 AM


Lovely...
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 1999-12-06 07:12 AM


Wow! Where were you on that stormy night?!
Very warming, indeed and very well stated
Elizabeth

Kitty**
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5 posted 1999-12-06 07:18 AM


Oh Boy!! This one touched me deeply!
Good writing!

Pepper
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6 posted 1999-12-06 09:55 AM


Very lovely indeed First Knight.....really enjoyed this much!

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!



hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 1999-12-06 09:58 AM


Very nicely done and I love your name  
First__Knight
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8 posted 1999-12-06 08:39 PM


My this board is filled with so much love and respect....I am honored to be among you all.

Severn- Thank you  

Elizabeth- I was the thunder in that storm..Did you not hear me call you?

Kitty- You words touched me even as mine did you

Pepper- I am glad I could give a little back

Hoot- I like you name as well...hehe  Love RN's  

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
9 posted 1999-12-07 02:16 AM


This was very romantic and beautiful!  
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