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Lost amongst the creases

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Kevin
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0 posted 12-06-1999 12:39 AM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

Awake again,
Sleep will not come.
Look at me, and what you did.
Where i've been,
What i've become,
Innocence forgot this kid.

Intentions well,
You never chose,
to tear me into all these pieces.
Still as i fell
You never rose,
to save me, lost among the creases.


 The two most waisted things in life are time and potential, I have both and not a clue what to do with them.
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1 posted 12-06-1999 01:08 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Keep writing them, Kevin.
I'll keep reading.
Innocence lost is maturity found.
I like what you write.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kevin...I think this is perhaps one of the best I've seen from you. Great job  
Denise
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Yes, I agree! This is beautiful, Kevin.

 Denise


 
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