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Kevin
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0 posted 1999-12-06 12:39 PM


Awake again,
Sleep will not come.
Look at me, and what you did.
Where i've been,
What i've become,
Innocence forgot this kid.

Intentions well,
You never chose,
to tear me into all these pieces.
Still as i fell
You never rose,
to save me, lost among the creases.


 The two most waisted things in life are time and potential, I have both and not a clue what to do with them.

© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 1999-12-06 01:08 AM


Keep writing them, Kevin.
I'll keep reading.
Innocence lost is maturity found.
I like what you write.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 1999-12-06 09:52 AM


Kevin...I think this is perhaps one of the best I've seen from you. Great job  
Denise
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3 posted 1999-12-06 10:09 PM


Yes, I agree! This is beautiful, Kevin.

 Denise



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