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Free From Ache

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Rachel_A
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since 11-30-1999
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North Webster, IN USA


0 posted 12-05-1999 11:33 PM       View Profile for Rachel_A   Email Rachel_A   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rachel_A


We were so close yet so far apart
You gave me everything except for your heart
Whenever you wanted me I was always there
But whenever I needed you, you didn't care.

I thought that maybe that was how it was meant to be
Until I realized and started to see
That maybe this wasn't right after all
And that's when I decided to stand up tall.

I should've stopped it sooner but I finally made it through
Even as I write this poem I know I'm over you
You made my very trusting heart break
Although now, it is free from ache.
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Severn
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1 posted 12-06-1999 05:40 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Hugs Rachel.
This sounded tough to go through and thanks for sharing it with us.
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2 posted 12-06-1999 10:07 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Such a painful experience to go through. You have expressed the pain very well.

 Denise


 
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