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Rachel_A
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since 1999-11-30
Posts 70
North Webster, IN USA

0 posted 1999-12-05 11:33 PM



We were so close yet so far apart
You gave me everything except for your heart
Whenever you wanted me I was always there
But whenever I needed you, you didn't care.

I thought that maybe that was how it was meant to be
Until I realized and started to see
That maybe this wasn't right after all
And that's when I decided to stand up tall.

I should've stopped it sooner but I finally made it through
Even as I write this poem I know I'm over you
You made my very trusting heart break
Although now, it is free from ache.

© Copyright 1999 Rachel_A - All Rights Reserved
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-12-06 05:40 AM


Hugs Rachel.
This sounded tough to go through and thanks for sharing it with us.
K

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-12-06 10:07 PM


Such a painful experience to go through. You have expressed the pain very well.

 Denise



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