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I Am Always With You

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Dawne
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0 posted 12-05-1999 10:50 PM       View Profile for Dawne   Email Dawne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawne

Here I stand at the door,
Forehead and hand pressed against the glass,
Waiting, hoping, wondering,
Will I ever see you on the other side.

Here I wait looking through the glass,
Hoping, wondering, will I ever see
Your love filled eyes looking back at me.

Here I am behind the glass,
My eyes infused with yours,
Wondering would you walk
Away if I was to open the door.

Here I hold open the door,
The glass separating us no more,
Hoping you will come inside,
And in my life forever reside.

Here I try to hide my tears,
Hoping, waiting, wondering,
Will you prove your love, take the chance,
And shatter the glass between us.
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Dawne
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1 posted 12-05-1999 10:58 PM       View Profile for Dawne   Email Dawne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawne

OOPS!! ha ha
Title should be
The Glass Between Us
Denise
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2 posted 12-05-1999 10:59 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is filled with such heartfelt longing! Very nice, Dawne!

 Denise


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3 posted 12-05-1999 11:10 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Dawne - Welcome to Passions.
The title snafu is cute, considering
The Glass Between Us was 'shattered'
and now here stands, I Am Always With You.
Like it all very much.


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Dawne
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4 posted 12-05-1999 11:22 PM       View Profile for Dawne   Email Dawne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawne

Yes Denise, it is
filled w/longing
thanks

Hey Marge, haha
I was embarrased when I
saw I put on the wrong title,
u made me feel better, thanks!
miriam
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5 posted 12-06-1999 01:26 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

Welcome Dawne...your poetry is beautiful and very comforting.

  miriam coronado


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