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Alwye

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In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-12-05 10:32 PM

I sense your breath
Floating across my skin
Your thoughts
Blanketing me
Like warming firelight
Melting the ice
That once formed
Within my tragic heart....

I sink within the depths
Of your softened eyes
No poet's word describes
The sheer emotion
Flowing from within me
For the first time
I am whole
Because of only you....

Tears wash over me
The tender droplets so vivid
Melting away with your kiss
My dreams now reality
As I feel your love
Consuming me
And I somehow know
That forever is ours....

My love blossoms
With the passing of time
Every minute
It becomes stronger
Unbreakable
Whenever I need you
You are here
As I shall be for you.

*Krista Knutson*

"When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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1 posted 1999-12-05 10:36 PM

Alwye - So beautiful.
I hope it's something you're living.
It's just soooooo pretty.

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Denise

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2 posted 1999-12-05 10:57 PM

Ahhhh, Krista this is soooooo beautiful! I love it!

Denise

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19

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3 posted 1999-12-05 11:06 PM

I've got to agree Alwye.....this is simply beautiful!.....

A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

Alwye

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In the space between moments

4 posted 1999-12-05 11:23 PM

Thank you all very much!

Marge- It is definitely something I'm living. Nothing's more inspirational to me than real life.

*Krista Knutson*

"I can feel you breathe, it's washing over me, and suddenly I'm melting into you..." ~Faith Hill: Breathe~

amber
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since 1999-06-15

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los banos, ca,

5 posted 1999-12-05 11:54 PM

this is a beatiful poem, i remeber feeling this feeling for the first time in my life, it overtook my entire soul, thank you for bringing it back.

Alwye

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In the space between moments

6 posted 1999-12-06 11:29 PM

You're very welcome, Amber.

*Krista Knutson*

"I can feel you breathe, it's washing over me, and suddenly I'm melting into you..." ~Faith Hill: Breathe~

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

7 posted 1999-12-07 02:47 AM

Very Lovely and Romantic! Great Job!

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

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8 posted 1999-12-08 10:01 AM

Krista...this is absolutely beautiful. I love your use of imagery

Alwye

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In the space between moments

9 posted 1999-12-08 09:14 PM

Thank you both very much!!!

*Krista Knutson*

"I can feel you breathe, it's washing over me, and suddenly I'm melting into you..." ~Faith Hill: Breathe~

Severn
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10 posted 1999-12-08 10:52 PM

Very delicate piece Alwye.

K

[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 12-08-1999).]

Seaangel
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since 1999-07-27

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Auckland, New Zealand

11 posted 1999-12-08 10:57 PM

Lovely piece, Alwye. Firelight is so potent, isn't it?

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