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Alwye
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In the space between moments


0 posted 12-05-1999 10:32 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

I sense your breath
Floating across my skin
Your thoughts
Blanketing me
Like warming firelight
Melting the ice
That once formed
Within my tragic heart....

I sink within the depths
Of your softened eyes
No poet's word describes
The sheer emotion
Flowing from within me
For the first time
I am whole
Because of only you....

Tears wash over me
The tender droplets so vivid
Melting away with your kiss
My dreams now reality
As I feel your love
Consuming me
And I somehow know
That forever is ours....

My love blossoms
With the passing of time
Every minute
It becomes stronger
Unbreakable
Whenever I need you
You are here
As I shall be for you.


 *Krista Knutson*

"When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~


© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 12-05-1999 10:36 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Alwye - So beautiful.  
I hope it's something you're living.
It's just soooooo pretty.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 12-05-1999 10:57 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ahhhh, Krista this is soooooo beautiful! I love it!

 Denise


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I've got to agree Alwye.....this is simply beautiful!.....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


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In the space between moments


4 posted 12-05-1999 11:23 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Thank you all very much!  

Marge- It is definitely something I'm living. Nothing's more inspirational to me than real life.  


 *Krista Knutson*

"I can feel you breathe, it's washing over me, and suddenly I'm melting into you..." ~Faith Hill: Breathe~

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5 posted 12-05-1999 11:54 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

this is a beatiful poem, i remeber feeling this feeling for the first time in my life, it overtook my entire soul, thank you for bringing it back.
Alwye
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6 posted 12-06-1999 11:29 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

You're very welcome, Amber.

        


 *Krista Knutson*

"I can feel you breathe, it's washing over me, and suddenly I'm melting into you..." ~Faith Hill: Breathe~

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7 posted 12-07-1999 02:47 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Very Lovely and Romantic! Great Job!
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Krista...this is absolutely beautiful. I love your use of imagery  
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Thank you both very much!!!  

 *Krista Knutson*

"I can feel you breathe, it's washing over me, and suddenly I'm melting into you..." ~Faith Hill: Breathe~

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10 posted 12-08-1999 10:52 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very delicate piece Alwye.  K

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11 posted 12-08-1999 10:57 PM       View Profile for Seaangel   Email Seaangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seaangel

Lovely piece, Alwye. Firelight is so potent, isn't it?
 
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