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The Jackal
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0 posted 12-05-1999 10:24 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

just a second of your time
fact or fiction
you would be mine
and crows do stutter
while your dead
black and bleeding
all critics rejoice
its like your master said
we all bow down sometime
even if divine
theres no peak in here
only down
how did i forget
when we've never even met..



 
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1 posted 12-07-1999 10:33 PM       View Profile for Rachel_A   Email Rachel_A   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rachel_A

i really liked this, especially the end.  this reminds me of an stp or nirvana song.
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