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Hints of romance

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Kevin
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0 posted 12-05-1999 09:18 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

Don't close my eyes
with words untrue.
In all your lies
I still see you.
I know your not
What claimed to be.
I know you've thought,
'bout you and me.
Why don't you care
whatís wrong with chance
Thereís something there
Hints of romance.
Don't run from this
Donít hide your heart
For us you'd miss
before we start.


 The two most waisted things in life are time and potential, I have both and not a clue what to do with them.
© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Dusk Treader
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1 posted 12-05-1999 10:25 PM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

Great poem Kevin!  I enjoyed this, one.  Thanks for Posting  

 "Human pride sings a vengeful song, inspired by the times you've been walked on" - Creed - "What If"

Dawne
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2 posted 12-05-1999 11:32 PM       View Profile for Dawne   Email Dawne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawne

I really liked
this one Kevin.
Denise
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3 posted 12-05-1999 11:35 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Another great poem, Kevin! Sometimes in the romance department, you just have to take a chance!

 Denise


Kevin
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4 posted 12-05-1999 11:42 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

Thanks d, i totally agree
Dawn and dusk
thank you also
haha will you look at that dawn and dusk replied to my poem =)
Dawne
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5 posted 12-05-1999 11:52 PM       View Profile for Dawne   Email Dawne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawne

wow, what do u know,
he not only is a poet,
he is a COMEDIAN!
LOL
 
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